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Reviews for After the War Ends

By : cathankitten
  • From cherrybifem on March 03, 2008
    I like the story line but you really need a beta, many spelling mistakes, sentance structures...plus many more. Just need someone to check it over before you post it.
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  • From ANON - Kasota on March 25, 2004
    Hehe, I'll be one of the few people to actually review such a good story. I hope you decide to continue it.
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  • From ANON - hERMIONE2928 on March 08, 2004
    PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
    IT IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - alym on January 31, 2004
    I need more.please
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  • From ANON - Alym on December 17, 2003
    Please give us the next chapter. I want more of this story bay.
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  • From ANON - Ice Lupus on November 09, 2003
    I have to agree: this Harry is disgustingly pathetic.
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  • From ANON - Alym on November 09, 2003
    I love it. that was great. The scene of rape brutal and very awful. *Smirk* was great . more soon, please?? bay
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  • From ANON - Katie on November 09, 2003
    Hmm, not to bad. Actually, aside from a feellielling errors, it was really good. I love how you portrayed y any and the foolishness of all the people depending on someone who was just a boy. Mind if I make a suggestion? You could make Voldy like nicer to Harry, just to gain his trust, or you could make Harry more resistant. Anyway, just a suggestion. I can't wait for you to update soon. I'll be waiting for it!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2003
    this looks as good as ever
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  • From ANON - Alym on October 13, 2003
    great, great, great. I am jumping of joy. Finaly you wrote the second chapter!! Do you now who much I wait for this?.
    No I am not crazy but please, write soon the netx chapter and if you are going to write sendme a email for show. Thank you.
    thank you.besos. and cha chapter was fantastic. harry fall in love with the draco and relief togeter. Lamento mis faltas en ing
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  • From ANON - Witchblade Hell on October 06, 2003
    Ooh, very cool! Can't wait to see more ... ... I'm very impatient! Do more Now!!
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  • From MashellBerry on October 04, 2003
    Wow I love the new fic. It's a great one. I've read along this lines bu they never finish them. Oh well I guess that means there hard to write huh. Well you know what that means right? That when you finished you will have accomplished true great work. God Luck and hope to see more soon. -I'm curious of who threw themself at Harry like that.-
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2003
    you're doing real good work here, you know that?
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  • From ANON - Amanda on August 15, 2003
    That was pure evil and malice to just end it there with a cliff hanger but effective. I'll be looking for chapter two on Sunday
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  • From ANON - Odessa on August 15, 2003
    NOOOOO! that was a bloody cliffhanger and If I don't find out what happens i will explode into a million little bloody peices that will all cry your name accusingly. Please do not send me to an untimely demise! Please, oh please update.



    Is that enough convincing?


    I know what its like to get no reviews :(
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