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Reviews for Transformations of the Heart

By : QueenC
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 16, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Derr on August 18, 2003
    Serverus needs to grow a set. PERIOD.
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on August 18, 2003
    Hiya,

    You have the definite priviledge of a *unique* storyline -- and that's not easy to find these days. : ) I am intrigued by your premise and look forward to seeing how you write out the two of them dealing with this event, especially given Snape's childhood trauma. I certainly enjoyed the first chapter.

    Kiri
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  • From ANON - Christi on August 17, 2003
    Great story so far!!! I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!!! I hope it ends happy!
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  • From ANON - Potions Mistress on August 16, 2003
    Oh yeah!! That is a wonderful start to what seems to be a hugely promising story. I hope you update often, as i am waiting for the next installment now. Will he be able to get over the fact she is a werewolf and possibly find a way to cure her? You *are* gonna tell us how they got together , right? UPdate soon!!
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on August 16, 2003
    Interesting opening chapter. Will Snape be able to cope wtih what Hermione has become after his youthful experience at the hands, or should that be claws, of Lupin? I'm looking forward to see how you develop the idea, so I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - SillyLily on August 16, 2003
    Ooooo!! I like it, I like it! Please continue! I can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 16, 2003
    im liking it... its yet to have been done i believe. Keep up the brilliant work.

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  • From ANON - hellfire on August 16, 2003
    hmm...
    actually, i don't think that they were as ooc as you consider them to be. i think you've got snape down quite nicely; fighting with the prejuidices he's lived with his entire life, and indeed, has even supported, clashing with his love for hermione. and hermione... well, i don't think she'd be quite stupid enough to try to patch a werewolf up, but i do think that she probably wouldn't be able to get away from a werewolf, wand or no. sorry, just don't.
    and dumbledore? you've got the meddling old git down perfectly.
    the only thing that i really noticed was that you might want to wait a bit and reread your stories before posting them. i noticed a few typos, but they were the annoying ones that are spelled correctly and are therefore not picked up by a spellchecker. (there was an "ever" rather than an "every" somewhere in there...)
    can't wait to see where you're going with this; i think that snape needs to confront his fears.

    cheers!

    hellfire
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  • From ANON - heather on August 16, 2003
    This is a good start, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Raven on August 15, 2003
    oooooh!!..

    this is a great start, I so want to see what happens next..

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  • From ANON - Andrian on August 15, 2003
    Interesting very very interesting...You have me torn. I am a stoic HG/SS shipper HOWEVER....I fell in love with the Remus first...so Hermione could be quite suited to the lovely werewolf now...but she is in love with Severus in this story...so I see a juicy angst filled fic ahead.. Good start
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