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Reviews for The Enigma of a Rose

By : blueribbon
  • From ANON - Mellondrama on April 01, 2005
    I like the beginning. It was hard to read at some parts because of the spelling slurrs, but it's not bad. Definitely something worth the effort to continue.
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  • From blueribbon on October 09, 2003
    Dear readers:

    I have taken away all the chapters I have created so far and one by one will put my edited work up. Thanks so much Rapunzel and red rose, you've been a great help. Please review and tell me what you think of my work now that it is completely edited.

    Lots of love,

    ribbon :P
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  • From blueribbon on October 06, 2003
    Hello there! With permission from Lily I am on her account right now correcting and editing to my liking her fan fic, which is to be shared between the both of us. I am going to be writing chapters nine and onwards with Lily. Lily (blueribbon) is leaving this to me. fanfiction.net will be hosting this fan fic under my name soon and I will be adding that Lily is part of this too.

    The reasons for this are quite basic~

    1. Lily has plenty to do and cannot be completely dedicated right now.
    2. She needed someone to edit her work.
    3. She bleieves her plot is side-tracking and together she thinks we can make it flow.
    4. I am her buddy from uni and the both of us are taking a journalism and a creative writing course, this is why she believed I was best for the job.
    5. I am also a fan fic writer.

    I know this might seem sudden to all of her fans who love her work. Remember one thing though! LILY IS STILL WRITING THIS FAN FIC. I AM MERELY JUST COACHING AND HELPING HER WRITE WITH MY OWN IDEAS AS WELL.

    ~Celia (:x:redrose:x:)
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  • From cherylzv on October 05, 2003
    Please don't give up on your story - I think that the concept and imagery are beautiful. I have emailed you with some further thoughts.

    Best wishes,
    R.
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  • From ANON - redrose on October 05, 2003
    Hey there! Checking out Snapey sites and came across this. It's really good but I think it needs corrections.

    :x:redrose:x:
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  • From blueribbon on September 26, 2003
    I'm what you'd call having a writer's block~

    Currently I have delayed greatly 'A Dreary World', and am right now making the story-line in this fan fic go a little dull.
    I'm going to make the next chapter (Chapter Ten) really deep and very interesting. That's probably where you will see the rivers meeting, lets just put it that way.

    If you have any questions, feel free to email me. Any suggestions will be accepted.

    Also constructive criticism will be very welcomed. I know many of you have your doubts, and now is the time I'd like to hear them.

    ~blue ribbon
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  • From RickyRoo on September 11, 2003
    This is very good so far! A few typing errors, but otherwise very smooth and entertaining.
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  • From ANON - Corazon on September 07, 2003
    Superb! Absolutely superb! Oh, and
    I love the new title!

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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  • From blueribbon on August 30, 2003
    I have changed the story title to something, which no doubt will have more to do with the storyline..."The Engima of a Rose"

    -Blue Ribbon
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  • From ANON - Corazon on August 27, 2003
    I just read chapters 4 and 5 and I enjoyed
    them very much. I also read you author's
    note and am very enticed by what you had
    to say.

    School has started up for me again, so I
    am having a difficult time reading all of the
    updates. Don't worry if you post without me
    reviewing. I am still following the story, but
    I only havme tme to check aff.net once a week.

    Hugs,
    Corazon

    PS
    Thanks for reviewing my story!
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  • From TheLadyFeylene on August 27, 2003
    This is a very well thought out story, full of detail. You've put a lot of effort into this, and it clearlyws. ws. I noticed a couple of minor grammer mistakes, but above all the structure is very s. :. :-) Altogether, rather well done.
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  • From blueribbon on August 27, 2003
    Thank you for that. Yes the story will be completed, this may take a few months, bhe phe plot thickens as you get into chapter six (which I am currently writing). The idea of Fate Has Different Plans is rather complex, it explores the emotions to the utmost of both characters, the ending is rather shocking. It climaxes, every chapter takes one step further. Some of the people who read this may get confused, the metaphorical language will increase and lead into more depths.

    Through every chapter you slowly see the true colours of Ophelia.

    The message I'm trying to pass through is rather simple. Ophelia is in the beginning seen as the light and Snape as the darkness, but as you go through it more it swaps. It's a sybolism of darkness and light. (I'm contemplating on changing the y tiy title.)

    -Blue Ribbon
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on August 26, 2003
    I like both your fics they are more original than most of other Snapefics however I`m such a devoted Snapelover that read all kind of fics about him,have to admit your work is enjoyable because of ideas of plots-I hope you develope them to very interesting pieces of writing,I like smut yet with good plot it`s more admirable.Ophelia as an Auror involved with Snape-this is a good idea,brings this love-hate,friend-enemy realationship and hope for long,well-written and created story in.I have had the same thoughts reading your other story-A Dreary World-so I had hopes you are going to write both stories to the very end(sorry,I heartfully hate the unfinished fics which I`ve enjoyed).
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  • From ANON - Blue Ribbon on August 21, 2003
    thank you for that, hopefully there will be many more reviews as kind as yours...

    -Blue Ribbon
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  • From ANON - Corazon on August 20, 2003
    Good chapter! I like the way you conviniently put
    these two together. Her thoughts were great,
    especially the box of un use contraceptives! I will
    patiently for the next chapter.

    Hugs,
    Corazon
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