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Reviews for And While the King Was Looking Down

By : Hanakai
  • From ANON - tunclr4 (Em) on September 23, 2003
    I am shaking from emotion... your fic(s)... the suspense...tension... *still crying* there are no words....
    I would give everything I hold dear to write like t.. m.. my originality, soul, sanity... for such depth... O god, now I just sound like some obsessed fool...
    Btw, I'm the same person who reviewed the 'You're standing on my Neck' fic.... the one with half the lyrics...

    *moved*
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  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on January 04, 0000
    im just plain old laughing my fucking ass off ok there i said it i love it
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on August 18, 2003
    I am in raptures over your stories. Your stories truly breathe. They are organic and liquid, if such a thing can be possible simultaneously.
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on August 18, 2003
    you have done it again, my dear! i was bouncing in my chair reading this! and i'm sooooo happy to know there is still more. you have become one of ym favorite authors, darling. finding this here was such a treat! you've made my day, in more ways than one.!

    hugs, darling. keep up the good work!

    forever yours,
    ladydeathfaerie
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  • From ANON - evelia on August 18, 2003
    Nothing short of beautiful, Kai. The whole thing...this is one of your best, without a doubt. I've sat here and read it thrice! Snape breaking down, little by little, Harry closely in tow, you mapped it out with the grace and perfection of a true master. I would list the things I loved, if I didn't fear quoting the whole work. I simply loved it, and thus you have left me eagerly waiting the next installment. For now, I can only read your works over again, and wander about with this on my mind.

    By the way, I'll keep in mind that your idea was wholly orgininal, even if it is being used by another. I adore Telanu's work as well, and have spoken to her a few times. May I mention these? I think she'd positively love them. =]

    Anyway, fantastic work love. The slash wasn't physically strong, but it was by far one of the most powerful.

    evelia.
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  • From ANON - sorceress on August 18, 2003
    Source of your title is from "American Pie" by Don McLean. "And while the king was lookinwn, wn, the jester stole his thorny crown." :) Great story!
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