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By : cherylzv
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on April 04, 2004
    Oh I am so happy. So happy for Severus too.
    Megan's wedding gift was lovely. Touching moment when Severus was able to open the music box. Very bittersweet.
    (claps hands) They will be together again soon.
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  • From ANON - joanna_ms on March 24, 2004
    i really liked the use of the pensive even though at first i wasnt sure if it could relly happen like that. but then i remembered that they can sit in chairs in them so why not lay on beds too! i am blown away to get such a wonderful character of snape. most stories make him too bad or too good but you make him beautiful and make me remember why i like him. his crying made me so sad but it was real. dont wait to long to bring megan back please, we are waiting!
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  • From ANON - appy lady on March 23, 2004
    Hi, I have been enjoying your story from the beginning and was thrilled to see that you are still working on it. s afs afraid you were going to leave us all with no ending :)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 22, 2004
    Arthur's thoughts about the Ministry job seem very accurate to that circumstance, but it was odd that Fudge was allowed to speak at this event, given the political situation.
    It is gratifying to see Snape get his medals, and good seeing Megan's parents at the ceremony. I was surprised like Harry to see nothing for Hermione or Ron. The gift Megan's mother gave to Snwas was wonderful, showing the secret photo of the kiss ( how sneaky of her Parents ;>), but also emotionallenchenching to someone lSnapSnape.
    Snape managing to keep it together for the ceremony isn't a surprise, but in private is where I would expect Snape to completely succumb to the grief.
    Having been though my fair share of funerals, the private reaction of Snape at the end is much more accurate of people in the grieving state- the unstoppable crying and emotions.
    Mixing the award ceremony with the memorial seems to dampen the funeral effects. But the memorial implies the funerals were already held prior.
    Good writing and great details. Please don't let our poor PM suffer much longer.

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  • From ANON - Magdelena on March 20, 2004
    Poor Severus, so sad. That was a beautiful ceremony, and again, you handled everyone from the wizards to the magical creatures so beautifully that nary a one was neglected. I'm so glad that you touched on Megan's special relationship with Firenze, and thought of the two twins being the only ones who would truly understand their loss. These little extras are what make your story so special.

    Take your time, we'll be here patiently awaiting the next installment.

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Darsina (Captain Anderson) on February 28, 2004
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  • From ANON - Darsina (Captain Anderson) on February 28, 2004
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  • From ANON - Samantha L. on February 25, 2004
    Rapunzel -

    I have been following your story for a couple of weeks now but didn't want to leave a review until I had caught up to you. I really love the story and think that your OC is brilliant. I personally like seeingtrontrong femine character and think that you do a good job ncinncing her out and making her realistic in the role she is supposed to have. You lay out an idea that makes you think one way but then later it unfolds about what it really is! I like that in a story and you have hooked me into checking back here to see how things turn out. I also love the details, you let us see a side of Snape that they don't talk about enough in the books, him hiding under the blankets was so funny and so sad. The love scenes are very good, nice to read and also what I imagine would be in character. I wish you had more Lupin, but that is just because I like him a lot in general. Excellent Story!

    SLL
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 24, 2004
    Wow- Viktor is intense, can HG handle him?

    I download your updates as I find them. TV here is a bit..different, bhen hen again I rather read fan fic.

    Need update on Potions Master, he isn't doing very well.

    What was the dark arts m tha that affected Harry.

    Angsty funrerals with Snape attending????
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  • From ANON - Mary Beth on February 23, 2004
    HOT!!!

    I was waiting for the HG/VK connection, lol. Well done lemons as usual, they are steamy and well writtne. Iam glad to have some happy stuff going on in all the sadness. Please update soon, I check all the time to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on February 22, 2004
    I love Sev's reaction to needing to save Harry. Precious!! Beautiful job handling Viktor and Hermione. BTW I think you are doing an excellent job handling the angst. Never cheesy, just fabulous!!

    Take care. I've got to head off to a Mardi Gras Parade. Life in New Orleans is never dull during this time of year. LOL!!!!!!

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Debbie on February 22, 2004
    Oooh - it sounds kind of creepy digging up your OC. Great lemons in the chapter with Hr and VK.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on February 22, 2004
    Great story, but I would really appreciate more Hermione and Viktor, please!!!! Your Viktor is such a great character.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on February 21, 2004
    I just discov you you updated! I am in India and internet access for me is spotty. Please forgive late reviews.

    Angsty chapters. Wow Harry saves Snape so they are even? Do I still get an angsty funeral since characters died?

    So there is still hope for a happy ending for some of the characters. Waiting to see whats wrong with Harry and did Snape off Malfoy? IS Voldemort really gone?

    Please update soon, I can't take the cliffies.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on February 13, 2004
    George died? AWWWW! I love George. He is my favorite Weasley. (Well, , Ch, Charlie is actually.)
    Write more soon.
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