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By : cherylzv
  • From ANON - Magdelena on November 04, 2003
    Ahhh, I swear this story is more addictive than caffeine. My only complaint is: Much too short!! Hee Hee! I can't wait to see what you do with Viktor. I've actually been re-reading book 4 myself, and I have to admit, sometimes I get sucked into seeing the world from 14 year old Harry's point of view. Hmmm, Herm-own-ninny might have some issues to work out with ole Viktor. But more importantly, I can't wait for the details of Megan's plan.

    Keep updating.

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 04, 2003
    Okay R., how is Viktor going to save the day? What is the big plan? Write more soon... Izz can'tz standz it!
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  • From lilyadar on November 04, 2003
    Oh my god, the beginning was so well described - it also was so sad, the description of Meg holding onto her bunny was just so heart-breaking. I'll soon read the rest of this fan fic. Excellent from what I've read so far.

    luv lily
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  • From ANON - Mary Beth on October 29, 2003
    This story is amazing! I tried it on a rec and am glad I did! Your style is so cool and your OFC is so much better than some I have seen. Plus I like seeing our dear Sev with a *grownup* for a changnd snd someone who is a match for him and not just in awe of him. Pls update soon - am looking forwrad to it.

    HUGS
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on October 26, 2003
    Yet another fantastic update. I'm so happy with your OC. She's such a great character. Strong enough to match wits and magical abilities with the likes of Severus Snape or several of her cocky students (hee hee), but delicate and genuine enough to need Molly's approval. I also love the scene between Ginny and Harry. I love that you've developed their relationship slowly. Why does everyone think that kissing is point A and sex is point B. Obviously, you've shown through the slow progression of their sexual relationship that you are one of the individuals who realizes that sex is point Z, and half of the fun is getting from B to C to D...etc... Bravo!! Keep up the fabulous updates. I was craving for more of your work and I am now happy! :)

    (BTW Marauders chaps 1-6 is up. Lemme know what you think)

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - Talene on October 26, 2003
    Hey! Look at the delays in mine! I would have NO room to talk! LOL Such a wonderful story! Who're you going to have herm go after or fall forthe ever popular Remus? Still reading....
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on October 26, 2003
    I love your fic!!! I can't wait for the final battle! Is it going to be set outdoors so Megan can show off her witchy Mage goodness? I hope she kicks some serious DeathEater ass!

    I like the Harry/Ginny aspect if it is kept as a side story. The main focus is Severus/Megan and I like their relationship better. Could you please throw some romance Hermione's way. She deserves it. I also appreciate that you don't have Severus with Hermione. It is getting a little overdone.

    Is Victor Krum going to join to physically condition the kids or as a love interest for Hermione? What about good ole dependable Ron? Poor schlub...
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  • From ANON - Talene on October 11, 2003
    Beautiful!! I LOVE this story!! I have waited for soooo long for the update! It was worth it! Please continue to write!
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  • From ANON - Jorrn on October 11, 2003
    Was a bit confused when "Snape" was making rounds after being injured. But then it made sense once I read further. Love how complex you have made his character...his wanting to absorb the pain as a way of compensating for his past. Can't wait to see what is in store for them and how the battle will shape up.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 11, 2003
    Ohhh...ahhh...wwwoowww! ahem...excuse me whilst I go change my underwear...panites suffered embarressingly from that chapter....

    Sorry I missed reviewing the last update...damn kids...damn uni...damn assignments...

    You are a true story teller...imagery was magnificent, beautiful, erotic...yada yada yada..

    In eager anticipation of more

    Shem xxx
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  • From ANON - Barrie on October 11, 2003
    Thank you, that cleared it all up nicely. This chapter was excellent, Malfoy is such a snake! Sorry for being confused, I am reading about five different stories right now and sometimes switching back and forth can be disorienting. Keep up th egood work.
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  • From ANON - Jorrn on October 06, 2003
    Just finished reading through this. Loved the idea of Meg with her changing hair...don't we all wish we could change like her, though perhaps not green. I like the fact that though she was adopted and raised by the Waters, they truly care for her. It is nice that though they are muggles, they are accepting of her abilities and her world. I love the contrast with her beauty and warmth with Severus' coolness and er..lack of beauty. But I really love that she searches for the man he truly is rather than the one he presents to everyone else. I also like the unfolding mystery of what is going to happen next. Can't wait to see. Would love to see Snape as a papa!
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  • From ANON - Barrie on October 05, 2003
    How did Severus get injured? Was he the entertainment? I must have missed something. Great story so far and I really like the oc, she's great.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on September 30, 2003
    Well, So much for my previous exquiste contented tunnel vision on Sev having anything to do with anyone except Hermione. *Sighs* Thank you for bringing me out of a blind sided stupor. I am just glad that the first courageous attempt I made to read past SS/HG pairings was so brilliant---I could have beed scarred for life had it not been.

    Please update soon, desperately craving more

    Shemxxx
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  • From ArachneNonafel on September 28, 2003
    Oh COOL!!! LOL HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!
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