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By : cherylzv
  • From ANON - CoffeeBuzz on September 20, 2003
    Loving it! What a neat surprise!
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  • From ANON - kath on September 20, 2003
    I have just been reading this story thus far and although love it and plan to read to the end and hope you write more I would just like to point out a few things. This is by no means a criticism but when JKR made Harry Potter she made all her characters floored in one way or the other. Harry has Glasses and messy hair but has the courage to compensate, Hemione has big teeth and bushy hair but makes up for it with intelligence and wit, as with Snape who has long greasy hair and a hooked nose but his charisma overshadows these faults. Maybe its just me but when I read a character that is Beautiful, Intel lent, nice while being a sportsman and musician at the same time and generally perfect it overwhelms me and I can't think of that character in my mind as a real person because someone that perfect isn't believable as a character. I hope that some time during this story her emotional damage will surface and some cracks will show in her character.
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on September 20, 2003
    Awesome!! Awesome!!! Awesome!!! You had me going until her dad slipped up. It never even occurred to me that Albus could be the uncle.

    Great Chapter!!!

    Maggie
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  • From ArachneNonafel on September 19, 2003
    I really am enjoying this story!! Please don't run out of ideas..
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on September 14, 2003
    You are truly doing an amazing job with this story. I loved the way you handled Bill in this. Just because one guy gets the girl doesn't have to make the other fellow a bad guy. Fantastic as usual. Loved the update!! What idea has our brilliant Megan inspired???

    Magdelena
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  • From EVegvary on September 06, 2003
    This just keeps getting better and better. You've got a great way of writing lemons and the erotic tension you've created is just heady! Yum!

    Thank you for reviewin pie piece - it's appreciated more than you can know.

    I'll keep awaiting yupdaupdates.

    Be well and here's to the muse!
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on September 06, 2003
    Nice job as usual !!! Mmmmmmm, to shower with Severus ^_^

    More more more please ......

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - leda on September 02, 2003
    I am hooked now. Please dont wait to long to update. Love the story.
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  • From ANON - CoffeeBuzz on September 01, 2003
    Yessss!!! Thank youuuuuuu!!!
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on August 31, 2003


    This has been an absolutely amazing story !! I don't see why it has not gotten more reviews, but it makes me feel better about my stories getting so few.

    So...... great job.......keep it up........and woo hoo Sex God Severus !! (Unfortunatley, we know men are NOT like that, but we can dream........)

    Glinda
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  • From ANON - Magdelena on August 31, 2003
    Again, you have outdone yourself. These chapters are fantastic!! You are a great writer. Keep it up. And have fun in Algebra. :) (YUCK!)
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  • From ANON - Talene on August 31, 2003
    hehe....i was waiting for this last chapter with bated breath! BRAVO!!!
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  • From ANON - Talene on August 30, 2003
    Your story is lov My My heart aches so for Severus! I know you will let everythiung work out well in the end but still my heart is pained in the anticipation! This is one of my favorite stories!!
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  • From EVegvary on August 30, 2003
    Can't tell you how thrilled I was when I saw how many chapters I had to catch up on! I'm really enjoying this story. I love your OC - she's really well developed and fits in perfectly with the HP world. Nicely done. Snape is becoming more human and that's always enjoyable!

    My only concern with your last chapter is - did did Megan know where to find Snape and why did she follow him to such a place? I will go back and recheck, perhaps I missed it.

    Keep writing - you're doing a great job!
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  • From Magdelena on August 27, 2003
    Loved your story. I have been following it since you first posted, but realized when I saw your review of my story that I had forgotten to review yours. Sorry!! Anyways...as I already said I loved it. You have developed a wonderful original character. And you've done a fantastic job making your readers fiend for info about her past with your first chapter. BTW I love the insertion of Bill Weasley. He's been a favorite of mine since JKR first described him in Book 4. I'll be thrilled if she winds up with either BW or SS.

    If you ever need a muse feel free to email me. I've got bunches of plot ideas, and no time to write them. I'd be happy to share. (If you get a chance, I've got two more fanfics posted here, one starring BW! I'd love to see what you think of them).

    Good job, again.

    Magdelena
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