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  • From ANON - droxy on January 05, 2006
    please update!!!
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  • From ANON - innocent camels on December 12, 2005
    How I ever got my rocks off
    Prophet Muhammad and Paedophilia+Some sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

    From "The Life of Muhammad"

    After Khadijah died, Muhammad dreamed that he was to marry A'isha, the daughter of Abu Bakr. She was six (6!) and he was fifty. But firstly he married the widow Sawdah who was very motherly towards his children and, a few months later, to his child bride A'isha. She continued to play with her dolls for several years until, at the age of nine, her marriage was consummated.

    Rights of the Child (contd)
    10 Aug. '00 Reformers in the Iranian parliament are seeking to raise the age of marriage for girls from 9 to 14 and boys from 15 to16. Currently the girl's age is determined by the A'isha/Muhammad marriage. She was six and he was fifty - he did "wait" until she was nine to consummate the marriage

    Penetration of young girls can seriously damage their reproductive organs, let alone any psychological harm it can do. The high maternal mortality rate can be directly attributed to this practice. Also children need time to have a childhood and also study.

    For more on pedophilia "Sayings of Khomeini" . Warning the words of this "holy" man may cause you to vomit. Their authenticity has been verified. (See links on article.)

    Some Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini

    Ayatollah Khomeini:
    A man can have sexual pleasure from a child as young as a baby. However he should not penetrate, sodomising the child is OK (Huray for Khomeini, what say you to that, my fellow firm believers?). If the man penetrates and damages the child then he should be responsible for her subsistence all her life. This girl, however does not count as one of his four permanent wives (Join Islam: fuck them raw and get away with it!). The man will not be eligible to marry the girls sister. (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990, Excerpt: Page [1])

    It is better for a girl to marry in such a time when she would begin menstruation at her husband's house rather than her father's home. Any father marrying his daughter so young will have a permanent place in heaven (and seventy more virgins to take in bloody sodomy!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990 [Mohammad (founder of Islam) The Pedophile])

    A man can have sex with animals such as sheep, cows, camels and so on. However he should kill the animal after he has his orgasm. He should not sell the meat to the people in his own village, however selling the meat to the next door village should be fine (11!!). (From Khomeini's book, "Tahrirolvasyleh", fourth volume, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990)

    "If one commits the act of sodomy with a cow, a ewe, or a camel, their urine and their excrement become impure, and even their milk may no longer be consumed. The animal must then be killed and as quickly as possible and burned." (The little green book, Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini, Political, Phylosophica, Social and Religious with a special introduction by Clive Irving, ISBN number 0-553-14032-9, page 47)


    Marriage with children
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  • From ANON - droxy on July 27, 2005
    Please please update
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  • From ANON - InuYasha\'s Girl on April 25, 2005
    please continue

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  • From ANON - Apothecaria on March 23, 2005
    Hi, Rapunzel. I was going to rec this story in the sycophanthex forums, and noticed that the text in some of the chapters has been degraded. No offense to this site, but I wonder if you would like to restore this story and move it to http://occlumency.sycophanthex.com where you can find some new and I`m sure highly appreciative readers.
    Cheers,
    Apothecaria
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  • From ANON - droxy on March 02, 2005
    update please!!!
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 17, 2004
    Ahh thanks, so romantic.

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  • From ANON - Sineed on May 17, 2004
    Hello. I just discovered your story a few days ago and have been reading it when I can. Good storytelling! And your writing became more sophisticated over the course of the story. I'm a very picky Sevage, and you've done a great job of keeping Snape in character, like his reaction to the request to help Harry. And the white in his hair is perfect; of course he can't express himself, so his stress is revealed in some physical .
    A.
    And the lemons fit in perfectly. The one with thnsiensieve is a heartbreaker.
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  • From ANON - jenna on May 15, 2004
    I don't leave many reviews, but in your case I will make an exception. Despite my concerns about the overwhelmng strength and goodness of your OC - which leaves one to wonder where any tension in their story will be - In Need is so well written and hought out that I finished. Let me just say how glad I am that I did - the intricacy is amazing and the story is one of the best I have read, and I have read a lot of them. Your people are heros and their story is inspiring. POints that I would have tension with would be resolved several chapters later, ofte in undexpected ways. I see now her pressure to be so good and the fragile layer underneath. I like your OC very much and espcially now look forward to seeing the ways Megan and Severus will be together in a new way. I hope that you will break down some of her walls so they can truly be together.
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  • From Magdelena on May 15, 2004
    That was a simply marvelous chapter. I love the way you've kept Sev in character while still showing his devotion to Megan. And the McDonald's reference was priceless. Glad your school year has finally come to a close. But your story is always worth waiting for.

    Maggie
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  • From ANON - droxy on May 14, 2004
    Glad you finally updated, I really love this relationship. Loved the hospital scene. Very emotional.

    Now about the dark mark...I'll contact you in email or write me at mine listed above. I got a report due soon so I need a few days. I hope that is OK.

    Hopefully we will see more Harry and Ginny action and more HG and Viktor action too.

    I am so waiting for the wedding to have a ntotatotally romantic ending! I also can't wait for the releif factor to hit Albus and Megans parents.

    Overall, you managed to combine a lot of plot elements in this story...the war, smut =>, romance, angst, and hurt-comfort.

    More SS-OC kissing please, once she gets better. => => =>
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  • From ANON - SwedishGirl on May 06, 2004
    You've done a damn good job! This is absolutely the best thing I have ever red. Write more, I want more! Chapter 38 isn't the last one, is it? I hoot. ot. Pleeeaasee hurry with the next one!
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  • From ANON - sauleanne on April 09, 2004
    I really have enjoyed this story. I love OC characters because it expands JKR's wonderful universe. I particularly like the Hermione/Victor pairing -- what a delightful couple. Waiting anxiously for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Mary Beth on April 06, 2004
    Yay you! I didn't know how long it would be till your update bu'mgl'mglad I checked. Megan is finally getting better, what a reilef, now they can be together. I like how you showed how he missed her so much. Why is Harry going off by himself so much, isn't Ginny there to comfor him? Why is Ron going to live with Fred?
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  • From ANON - droxy on April 06, 2004
    OOOOH glad you updated.

    So it looks like a happy ending is coming. I like that Snape now has grey hair, he's been through a lot. I really enjoyed all the angst you put SS through (Sniff).

    I was hoping Harry would take solace with GW. Is our bossy HG going to show VK who's boss? Is SS going chew Megan's head off for keeping secrets?

    Now that Voldie is dead, what happens to SS dark mark?

    Really enjoying this well written story with OC.
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