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By : grrarrg0908
  • From ANON - cookie35 on November 30, 2003
    that was sad.. if I was hermione, I wouldn't have taken sevv for granted. could've jumpnto nto bed with him even if hye protested! haha! (gives a devilish smile)... that was too bad for sevv, that was just too new for their relationship and it already has gone bad. could you lessen the fights though i must admit the fights adds the spice. Conflict is an essence of a story. I applaud you for your good work and diversity.
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on November 29, 2003
    Bad Hermione! Worse Severus!!!! I know there are more chapters coming so he can't capitulate QUITE yet, but she was naked and vulnerable and he just walked away?... Poor Hermione! Excellent chapter, but I'm itchin' for some more lemons right about now! Severus is such a bad, bad boy... I guess I'll just have to spank him harder next time. Thank you again for your wonderful work- it is the highlight of my night (and being a retail manager in America on the day after Thanksgiving- I NEED a highlight!).
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  • From on November 28, 2003
    Here I sit, sated and pleased ... how ironic that when I
    originally entered the AFF update page and found the
    literary endeavours I have been savaging perusing had
    not submitted any new installments. As this occurs on
    a random basis, I then look to see if there may be any
    new tales to peak the interest and low and behold, I
    run unto this work ... praise Merlin!

    I have just spent several hours reading from the first
    chapter to the ... jaw drops as Severus turns to walks
    away from the open invitation of the shower drenched
    auror [fade out] ... last submission of Chapter 22.

    Firstly, to the author ... Huzzar! Thank you for taking
    time out of your busy schedule to entertain and delight
    others with your own t ont on many possibilities that
    could take shape in the Wizarding World. The intrapersonal
    and intropersonal perspectives between the characters are
    top notch. The cell phone conversations were an amusing
    addition and brought a deeper understanding for the reader
    into the relationship. The scenes are descriptive, sensual and
    vividly written ... which is a sign of one who makes every
    attempt to let the reader see the story through the eyes of
    the characters. This is always a plus for me. I have added
    your FF to my list of recommendations.

    Secondly, to the beta ... Thank you for all your efforts
    in assisting to make this piece of literature more reader
    friendly. The first six chapters were ugh ugh peruse and
    your abilities have improves one's enjoyment. It is so
    much nicer not have to figure out where one para ends
    and another begins.

    Thirdly, requested info about the reviewer ... female, age
    thirty-seven, residing in Pennsylvania, US. Single mum of
    three school age children [15, 13, 10]. Avid reader of HP
    and many forms of HP FFs.

    Finally, to the author ... Many thanks again for submitting
    this literary endeavour. I will continue to look for future
    updates to this saga [now knowing that the creative juices
    are still flowing and the hopes for Chapters 23 thru 28 are
    on the horizon]. Patiently awaiting ...

    *~*~*~*~*~*~*
    Drowning Ophelia
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 27, 2003
    OH man...I hope that little hissy fit didnt scare Severus off. I know if I was him Id go running like my ass was on fire. LOL...but then its a good thing Im not him. They need each other. I hope they do get back together.

    Love it so far

    Red

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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 27, 2003
    OH NO, Where is he going?!? I do hope he isn't going to leave after what happened, she really does need him!!! They do both have so much pain in them, but I really think that htey are in fact each other's greatest remedy!!! Can't wait for chapter 23!!! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!! De..^
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  • From ANON - NAT Flores on November 26, 2003
    Keep up the great work.It's really excellent!I just love it.Keep on writing.
    PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE.
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on November 25, 2003
    YAY!!!!!! Excellent chapter!!!!!!!!! I am very excited about the way this is going again. See, I KNEW Severus wasn't that big a bastard! And I am literally GRINNING that your writer's block is gone! I'm so excited!! Perhaps I should lay off the caffiene, though...
    I want more, please!
    Updates, not caffiene.
    But caffiene is okay, too, I guess.
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  • From ANON - cookie35 on November 25, 2003
    im sorry i wasn't able to review chappie 20. I just came home from a retreat. Yes, i am a religious person. NOT! anyway, chapter 20 is great! you made my day when you put bits and pieces bout lucius and hermione. it cleared up a lot of things. You wouldn'nt tnt to know what i have been imagining. Ha! so severus is the jealous. I believe its hard to make hiom jealous because of his stoic nature but you portrayed him as someone who when jealous is very hard to get along with. I pity hermione then. Chater 20 is heart wrenching.

    Cahpter 21 is very creative. you made them kiss and make up in a different way. Wait a minute,,, that was literal. I like how you made hermione out in this chapter. it proves even if she is hardcore she has feelings too... so about the last line... DO they have a relationship?
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 24, 2003
    EEEK! No don't withhold chapters!!! I have all the way to chapter 3 done on Confessions and chapter 4 is the smut, but eta eta is still working on them. I had to get a beta. I just don't trust my own writing w/out someone to proof for me.

    I have to say this was a nice chapter. Sweet, but not all mushy. I am glad that you didn't get all mushy since it would have ruined the rough and tumble attitudes of Snape and Mione! I really love this story! As always I look forward to the next round. Oh and I should call you Neville since it's your writing that's so explosive! ;c)

    Hugs,
    Ness
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on November 24, 2003
    Oh, you know something? I love a good story where I have to keep running to the bathroom for more tissue to wipe my snotty nose on because I cant keep the tears from coming...This was pure...ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

    In other words...I loved it

    Red

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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 24, 2003
    Excellent chapter (21). Now they are getting somewhere. Letting down their guards and betruetrue to themselves and each other. Beautiful. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 24, 2003
    YES, YES, YES, they are going to try to make a go of it!!! They are a perfect example of the saying; That which does not kill you can only make you stronger. Alone they are good, but together they will be GREAT!!!

    I am so glad that you have been delivered from your writer's block!!! I look forward to what is yet to come in this story & for her to tell him about her time with Lucius!!! Til next chapter, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 24, 2003
    Oh no - sappy Severus - I guess it had to go there, but I liked him so much better when he was biting (literally and figuratively). More, please.
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  • From slygriff21 on November 24, 2003
    Great story! I love the sexual tension as well as the anger and jealousy that Snape has toward Hermione as well as Lucius. Please update again and soon!
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 22, 2003
    Oh yes - just keeps getting better. Her breath starts coming faster in anticipation as she scrolls down and then she sees the author's notes. A soft curse escapes her lips and she saves the new chapter to favorites and waits. No, she won't just wait, she''ll leave a review and beg - - - More? Please?
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