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Reviews for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - fervesco on September 05, 2003
    Great start! It's nice to see Sybil on another level here and an explanation as to why on earth Dumbledore hired her! Poor old Sevvy is having a bit of a rough time - hope he gets a nice reward for his troubles soon! Once again, this is a wonderful fic and I anxiously await the next chapter (soon, right?!)
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on September 02, 2003
    OH! You are so cruel! I still can't help hoping poor Sybil will live! That poor woman has had a rough go. Everyone thinks she's a nutter and she isn't! It's just not fair! I can't wait for the next update! This story is getting good!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on September 02, 2003
    Chapter 2 was fantastic! I loved Sybil holding it over Severus's head like that. His reaction was perfect.
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  • From FaerieOfMischief on September 02, 2003
    Great idea darl! It's not fair though, you've made Sybil an important and rather decent character and it's starting to make me feel that my unreasoning hatred of her was.. well, alittle unreasonable *L* Can you pretty pretty please kill her soon? Then maybe I'll feel better.... All the best, hope to read more soon :)
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  • From ANON - jessicat1982 on September 01, 2003
    ooooh! I ly lly love the premise for this story. I can't wait for you to continue. I thought the prologue was really well written and I love the fact that you've written trelawny as a slighly paranoid but true seer. I'm looking forward to seeing how you decide to play out the cause and effect in the story line. I can see how sybil's paranoia might in the end be her demise. how that happens, I'll be looking forward to finding out. I like the fact that you also allude to the fact that trelawny may try to murder one of them. great start and I'll be looking forward to reading the next installment.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on September 01, 2003
    I'm intrigued! She's not really going to die though is she? Oh come on! Have a heart! Let the poor thing live! Something minor could happen to save her from meeting her end! Anyway, I like what you've started keep going! The more you update the more I review! ;cD
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  • From on September 01, 2003
    I like this. I have never read *anything* from Trelawney's point of view before and I'm really looking forward to more of it. (And I'm sure you know how much I adore Severus and Hermione as well!)


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