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Reviews for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 23, 2003
    What an amazing update to an amazing story. The build-up has been wonderful. "Are we almost there yet?" she cries with child-like anticipation.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on November 23, 2003
    wow...I love this story...it is so well written....I look forward to your next update...I am seriously looking forward to Trelawney's death.
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  • From ANON - Bree on November 23, 2003
    I just read all 22 chapters and I think that they are bloody brilliant! You are a talented writer with a great way with words. I do hope that you plan on keeping it updated... I'm apprehensive for the part in which Hermoine and Snape realize that they do really love each other, which ends up happening...right???? Keep up the great work!!
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  • From jennengle on November 23, 2003
    Very much looking forward to reading more of this!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 23, 2003
    I was just thinking about you, Kiri! And then I saw your update. I'm getting really anxious now that I know its drawing to a close. I loved their little "conversation" when he came to Dumbledore's office.
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  • From Lizski on November 19, 2003
    Very nice! I really look forward to seeing what you do with this - especially seeing how Severus manages to not get himself killed! I really like the tht tht that you've put in to this - I am vemprempressed!
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 17, 2003
    Wow - S is so wonderfully in character. I can't wait until the confrontation with his mother. Tstorstory needs you - we need your updates here, please. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 16, 2003
    I sure wish you could update this more! It's taking forever and it's such a good story! Ugh! MORE! MORE! MORE!!! Sorry, now that I've got that out! I loved tast ast chapter. Now if only we knew what Hermione really thought of marrying Snape, since she's really gonna have to now! *evil laugh*
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  • From farfie on November 16, 2003
    MORE! MORE! i demand more. right now... i'm waiting... impatiently waiting. come along now. *checks watch* your taking too long with this.

    hehe, but seriously. this story is amazing! i can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lynn on November 11, 2003
    Hey there! I figured I'd speak out about the psychologist comment made in your corrections note. As someone who is studying to become a psychologist, I completely agree with you that a lot of the students shobe sbe seeing someone about what they've experienced. However, in the realm of the story, psychology would be a Muggle science, and beyond that a lot of the things in the stories about bloodlines and the like are taken from a time when beatings and other acts like that were more okay, or at best not discussed with the outside world. That's my two cents on that!

    As for the rest of the story, it's coming along wonderfully! I love stories like this, you're developing the plotline amazingly. A lot of authors are afraid to have their stories reach this length so they rush into the action, making the story much less believable, you don't do that, and I LOVE it. :)
    can't wait for more!
    Lynn
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on November 11, 2003
    re counselling - we're English. we do stiff upper lips and cups of tea, we do pulling your socks up and getting on with things, we DONT do counselling.


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  • From ANON - nesscafe on November 11, 2003
    Okay, I am no longer feeling sorry for that bug eyed bitch! She aligned herself w/ Voldemort! No wonder she dies! She's stupid! I really and honestly don't want he die die in the end! There just has to be a way to save her! But the fact that she was cruel and stupid enough to go to Voldemort to force him to marry her instead of Hermione when she doens't even like him really sucks away any form of sympathy she had from me! She's at your mercy! I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 11, 2003
    Thank you for the quick update. This is a terrific story. Please more, the suspense is killing me.
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  • From ANON - huntergon on October 22, 2003
    i like this story so much!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on October 22, 2003
    This is a wonderful story, you must update and update ofton
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