Click Here!

Reviews for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 11, 2003
    HOT DAMN!!! What a chapter! Hermione sure did let Sybil have it! I can't say I blame her! I'd rip her arms off for touching my man too! I'm starting to feel less and less sorry for her! The fact that she went to Malfoy and made Voldemort order him to marry her was just wrong!!! At the same time it would serve her right if she lived and just ended up married to someone horrible like Gilderoy Lockhart or something! I don't know I'm torn. Oh well, I hope they can't find a way out of this marriage! Hehehe!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Helena on October 11, 2003
    This chapter is absolutely hilarious!!
    Keep up the good work,can't wait to read more!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 11, 2003
    After reading this chapter must say I am giving serious consideration to your attempt to bribe me....So loved to see Hermione finally break loose and give ol' Sybill some much needed 'understanding'...Don't blame her really...I mean if I was the one with a marriage contract to Sev, I would be chaining him to the bed *smirk* if it were necessary to keep him from other females * and considering this group and YOU especially, it is I am afraid very very necessay, not to mention enjoyable*

    Currently basking in mental imagery of Sev tied to my bed, waiting for more of your attempt to convince me that he is in Hermione's life and not mine *Liar...evil...lying...horrid woman*...

    Shem xxx
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rilla on October 11, 2003
    Brilliant! Just brilliant! 3:15 am, wow! I am impressed all around.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Veronica on October 11, 2003
    More please ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From WriterLady1031 on October 11, 2003
    I love this story. I has a good plot and all my questions are being answered. The setup of the larger plot, Trelawney's worry over her death, is also being setup nicely and it coordinates well with Hermoine and Severus's storyline. I love how you have all the details and character development because it is written very smoothly, leaving no gaps or holes for the reader to wonder about. finifinitely like your writing style and I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors to comment on. Please keep writing this story because's g's good! ^_^

    Ciao!
    Report Review

  • From farfie on October 10, 2003
    MUWAHAHAH!! I LOVE SEV's MOTHER!!! she's brilli I K I KNEW she was pannign something!! hahaha. this is great. utterly fantastic!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jade on October 10, 2003
    I can't wait until Trewnley*sp finds out! Oh what fun writting that...hehe. I hope Harry and Ron have some extra fun in her class.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michelline on October 10, 2003
    EVIL EVIL EVIL!!! Laugh!! C is the kicker, indeed. Can't wait to see what Hermione and Severus are going to talk about...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 10, 2003
    This story just gets better and better! I can't wait till Sev and Mione realise they aren't going to be able to get out of this marriage! *evil laugh* I hope you have anothhapthapter in the works! I can't get enough!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rilla on October 10, 2003
    Fantastical! I love Serapha. She had great observations about Albus's mind at work. Looking forward to seeing Severus and Hermione discuss things.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 10, 2003
    Ohhh..That marriage contract was worse than mine....well, just as bad anyway....Your right, wouldn't swap labors for all the Sev'sin the world...ok, maybe for Sev but...2 hours with the first...7 hours second (only bad during last 2 of transition though)...Your starting to become very...malicious..no...wrong word...down and out real dirty and evil with these two...I am so making you High Priestess of torment....

    Craving more...

    Shemxxx
    Report Review

  • From ANON - J on September 06, 2003
    Wonderful! I want more. Did they outsmaer? er? Or is she playing them? LOL what fun
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michelline on October 09, 2003
    Giggle! I was figuring something like this would happen. His mother is way to wily for them to outsmart her. I'm sure she completely anticipated this. She has out-Slytherined the Head of Slytherin... Go MUM!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rilla on October 09, 2003
    This is great. I just love Snape's mother in this one. So conniving. I love it that Ron is given license to behave like a jerk instead of actually being one.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!