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Reviews for Mothers, Witches, and Bargains Made

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - Jade on October 02, 2003
    your just teasing ME! I need more then that
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 02, 2003
    Eep! I love it that Snape's mother likes Hermione. I'd love to see her get her hand in this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2003
    it could do with some work
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on September 28, 2003
    No way! That fraud cannot be planning what I think she is! Horrid, horrid--of all the underhanded sneaky bloody--Ive got to win at all costs moves---this has got to be the most delicious of them :sm :smirk:. Gratulatio on the decidedly bastardly way you handled Sev this chapter too! * ds ads and applauds*. Until next time :)-

    Shemhamforash
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  • From ANON - Rilla on September 28, 2003
    Ooh, I can't wait to see what she has planned!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on September 28, 2003
    Great chapter! I was eagerly awaiting it. Can't wait to moremore.
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on September 28, 2003
    Goody, goody, goody. A new chapter! I hate to be demanding-Shit! why lie? I love to be demanding-I want more, more, more! NOW!-err, soon? umm please? Brilliant work, currently salivating for more,
    yours,
    Shemhamforash xxx
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  • From ANON - Red Writing Hood on September 27, 2003
    Kiri,

    I am enjoying this story. I wonder just what exactly Trelawney has up her sleeve regarding stopping this wedding. I look forward to more soon.

    Red
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  • From ANON - Helena on September 26, 2003
    So far so good!
    Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From on September 22, 2003
    Yay! A new chapter. I can't wait to see what his mother is really up to. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - celticwitch on September 22, 2003
    Interesting story so far. However, I thought I'd point out a continuity error so you can correct it. In chapter 1, Severus' mother's name was Serapha, in chapter 4, it's Cassandra. You might want to fix that (I've done that in some of my fics as well, when I haven't explored a little used character in a couple of chapters, I've forgotten the name I'd given them)
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  • From ANON - Laerai on September 11, 2003
    A wonderful start! And I am soo glad that you aren't rushing into things. It takes time to develop a plot and make it plausable! I'll be reading to see how it turns out!

    Keep writing,

    Laerai
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  • From ANON - MoD on September 11, 2003
    Wow! this is so intriguing. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on September 11, 2003
    This is turning into such a good story! Come on have a heart let the crazy broad live! Maybe she mierprerprits her own vision! What?! It could happen! Can't wait fot the next update!
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  • From ANON - Niceven on September 07, 2003
    Somehow you managed to bring back to life a mundane theme. Please do continue.
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