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By : Fervesco
  • From purefaith91 on May 20, 2011
    Very sweet. Love Hermione and Severus together and giving him a living mother added lots that is usually left out with her out of the picture. A really enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From purefaith91 on May 20, 2011
    Oh, Severus is evil...but the little (and not so little) girls love him. Very cute so far. p
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
    nice ending :) bit too short of course...
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    “Well, there’s tequila…” Harry began, but Hermione cut him off short.
    “Definitely!” A wicked grin spread across her face.

    “Indeed I am,” Hermione smiled, lifting a glass from the table, and clearing her throat. “I would like to make a toast to my new found sanity!”

    “Oh, and Hermione, remind me never, evo pio piss you off,” Ron said, his eyes growing wide.
    “Ron, you do that without even trying,” Hermione replied, but she was smiling. “Why so?”
    “Ginny’s working at St Mungos. Tells me that the doctors had a bloody nightmare of a time trying to remove those boils and reduce Justin’s head, but unfortunately they succeeded. But that was quite a job you did on his…well, you know…Doctor says even with intervention it will take weeks before it grows back! Strongest Effluo curse they’ve ever seen!”
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    “Please, Severus, I don’t know what’s wrong with her! And I can’t find Poppy and…” Hermione had tears streaming down her own face, and Snape’s heart went out to her. He reacout out to touch Charlotte’s forehead and felt the searing heat burn through his skin.

    “But I was so nasty to you yesterday and yet you still come to save Charlotte,” Hermione insisted.

    “I swear, Hermione, it was just the once. I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean for ithapphappen, I…”
    “Oh, quit the bull shit, Justin. I’m the one who’s sorry – sorry that I put up with your nonsense for so long!”

    “I have given you more chances that your sorry hide is worth! Get out!”
    “But Charlotte…”
    “Don’t you dare bring her into this,” Hermione fumed, advancing on Justin. “You have never been a father to her! And frankly, Justin, she is so much better off without you!”
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    “Bit late for that, I should think.” Snape flicked his wand, and roared “EFFLUO!”
    Justin’s flaccid penis shrunk, shriveling up until it was no longer visible.

    On a large velvet rug in the middle of the floor sat Charlotte, dressed up as a princess. Opposite her was Severus Snape, sitting cross-legged, a pink teacup in one hand, a gaudy plastic tiara perched upon his greasy head. Several dolls surrounded the pair of them. Hermione couldn’t help but smirk.
    “Mummy! We’re having a tea party!” Charlotte announced excitedly. “I’m Princess Charlotte and this is Princess Severus.”
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    And from what I’ve heard you can hardly comment on the state of my personal life,” Snape growled, but the moment the words left his lips he regretted them.

    “So, Hermione, I hear Severus’ mother is your new nanny,” Minerva broke the silence. “That’s quite a coincidence.”
    Hermione smiled, wondering really how much of a coincidence it was.

    Hermione snorted. “You’re not my bloody Professor anymore Sevykins.”
    “And you’ve made that quite clear, Miss Granger. However, you are a member of the staff at Hogwarts, and I, being a head of house, am your superior!”
    “Ooooh,” Hermione grinned, “bet that makes you feel like a big boy doesn’t it?”

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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    “However, I believe I told you to owl me before coming to visit.”
    “So you can conveniently have planned a holiday?

    Snape shuddered, rubbing at his face with his hands, trying to remove any trace of the woman from his body. He heard a giggle erupt from the far corner of the lounge, and turned to glare.
    “Oh, don’t tell me Sybil doesn’t get you going, Sev,” Hermione spoke sarcastically. “I was sure she’d be the perfect match when your mother asked! Pity. She’ll be so disappointed!”
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
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    “Nice entrance,” Snape drawled, as the first years filed in behind Minerva.
    “Nice hair,” Hermione shot back under her breath

    “Is that so? Rather convenient,” Snape sneered, spearing a carrot. “But I suppose you knew I was going to say that.”
    Hermione couldn’t help it – she laughed, trying to disguise it with a cough.

    Snape’s mother was taking care of her daughter! Gods, and look how he had turned out.

    “So, perhaps you could suggest someone, Hermione,” Ursula’s voice broke through Hermione’s train of thought.
    A nasty thought jumped into Hermione’s mind – no, she couldn’t…
    “Well, he does seem to quite like Sybil Trelawny.” …apparently she could.
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  • From pstibbons on June 21, 2009
    this could be fun :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 05, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - angel on May 11, 2005
    ohhh that was ... i love it i would love to read more of you work ... thank you for a great story

    angel

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  • From FrenchMaidenForLucius on November 04, 2004
    This story was really sweet. ved ved it. Are you considering a sequel?
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 04, 2003
    Another great story! Don't know why I didn't read it before...
    A little abrupt end... Sev lovinr sor so quickly doesn't allow too much interaction between them [ you get what I mean? ;) ] but I like the story... and Herm having a child from her first marrige is a good change.

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  • From ANON - Minerva7 on October 24, 2003
    Hi Fervesco,

    I was surfing around a bit and found 'Time Changes Everything' here.
    Of course, I read chapters 7, 8 & 9 :-)
    I really enjoyed reading this story and I hope you will write others in the future.

    Greets,
    Minerva7

    P.S. I saw you posted more of your work on this site. I'm going to have a look at it too.
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