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Reviews for Power Play

By : Mortifyd
  • From ANON - Rakina on July 19, 2005
    I really enjoyed reading this fic. It was very sweet and they were both believably in character.
    There were some mixed-up words where the text seems to have got muddled, might pay to edit this.
    I'll go and check if you've any more fic posted because I'd like to read more from you.
    If you get a chance, have a look at some of mine please & perhaps review?

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2004
    great story
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  • From ANON - tsk on January 21, 2004
    Pure pleasure! You have an exquisite decriptive manner. It was a joy to engulf myself in all of the Power stories. I hope that the further Power's are as enticing! I look forward to reading them soon.... VERY soon!
    What more can I say - Mort, you're a bloomin Genius!!!! Now stop reading this and get on with the next one!!!!!


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  • From ANON - snuffles on January 19, 2004
    Simple outstanding. I loved the build up from complete un-willingness to acceptance of what had to be done. i could feel the sexual tension in the air between them. Now I have to go & read the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Witchblade Hell on December 16, 2003
    Okay, I just spent ... hmm, I'm not sure ... about two hours or more reading all of your 'Power' titles, from first to last.


    .... I mean wow! I absolutely loved them! I couldn't stop reading, your writing style is amazing, my attention didn't waver and I did skip every couple of lines like I usually do with other stories. You held to the characters very well in each story and the plot ideas were great. In the first one, It was great how Harry and Snape stayed together at the end, then in the second started having problems. The description of feelings and emotions made it seem very real. The sex scenes were amazing I thought. They weren't too rough or quick, nor too slow ... they were perfect.
    I know it was just a small part, but my favorite part in all three was in the third. The part where, after Sev returns, he has that dream and accidentally boxes Harry in the face. It was great, how Harry silently gets up to go and Sev suddenly stops and figures out that he hit him. The feeling for me was very real, I read those few lines over and over again.
    I also liked the aprt after Harry goes off on his own. When Snape is yeling and grabs him up from the floor, then stops when he reminds himself of his past.
    And I just loved so many other things too!


    aly aly hope you do some more with this line of stories. Just as a suggestion, maybe you could have one where Harry is hurt instead.
    [I know just about everyone does that, but I thought it would be cool to capture's 's reactions this time] I thought it would be cool is something happened becasue of the extra power he'd been given, like maybe he was too young for soo much ... I don't know.

    Anyway, too bad for you, because I'm a fan now and that means I'll be looking for new stuff from you ;0P
    Please do more soon! I don't know how long I can wait before the death threats start aflowin'

    Later




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  • From ANON - SnapeLover on December 16, 2003
    Wellll... at first I thought this was just so funny, even after you get past the improbability of it all. But then it got so serious and sweet and sad... awwww!! This one's a keeper; you should be very proud of yourself. (And don't ruin it by adding more, *please*!)
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  • From ANON - Talene on December 16, 2003
    This is one of the best written pairings of these two I have ever seen! Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on September 14, 2003
    Wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on September 03, 2003
    this was absolutely yummy!

    i would almost like to see more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - katzenhai on September 02, 2003
    Beautiful.
    Powerful.
    Chapeau!!

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  • From ANON - tracey on September 02, 2003
    *shiver* excellent job! This is a plot I rarely get tired of reading about. Excellent job of describing the magical implications. Wow. I think I'm going to read this again .. best lines .. 'naked Snape naked Snape' 'plundering Potter plundering Potter' Thanks!
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