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Reviews for Fateful encounter.

By : Solaris
  • From nycginny on March 14, 2007
    very good so far please update asap!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2006
    please write more I really like this story
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  • From ANON - bree on January 26, 2006
    eh... yeah... first chapter was WAY better. this was way too rushed. you put an entire lifetime into one paragraph. definitely too rushed.
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  • From ANON - Bree on January 26, 2006
    you really should continue that one... even if it's multiple sexual encounters... that was just hot!
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  • From ANON - amanda on December 07, 2005
    great story
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  • From ANON - Carol on November 06, 2005
    Sorry for the last type-o; my fault
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  • From ANON - Carol on November 06, 2005
    Well, the plot was very quick and I wasn't the biggest fan of the ending. You spent more time on them having sex then ever spending more time on other things that made up their romance. Their relationship seemed more physical, there weren't very many adjectives inscribing simple things like how Harry loves the way Ginny does a certain thing that seems so small. Then again, I feel for you when people demand more of your story. I was just saying that your plot was very short and quick. I did like your style or writing in some parts of the stoty, mostly in the second chapter, the first just seemed slightly different.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 27, 2005
    Harry was a virgin until he was 27? Ron and Hermione having sex in a bar? A little out of character. The smarter plan would have been to elope, then announce that they had gotten married. Then when the baby came, just tell everyone the baby was doing great for being a 32 week pregnancy. I would never have wanted people to think that Harry was only marrying her because of the pregnancy.
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  • From ANON - amber on August 24, 2005
    hello i thought the story was very well written but honestlyitseemed like you got lazy at the end.
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  • From ANON - kenshin91785 on June 27, 2005
    I think this was a greart story. I liked the style of which you wrote your story. I really like the 2nd chapter, except for the ending. I think you should have continued the story and not have rushed into an ending. I think you should consider a 2nd version of the story and continue it and not rush an ending. I think should go into more detail of what happened to harry and ginny after the day they told her family. Your story I would say would of made it to my top ten list of harry/ginny fanfic if not had the rush on the ending. You should still use your ending as an outline for the rest of the story but use more detail. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - diana on May 09, 2005
    CONTINUE IT OR ELSE........JK!!!its excellent so please continue.email me on what you are going to do.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on May 08, 2005
    i really like the story.it was very kinky. u should really contuine it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





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  • From PlanetPluto on May 07, 2005
    This was an amazing story.
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  • From ANON - Ted M Hammett on March 02, 2004
    I enjoyed the story, the only complaint I have is you continually called his dick a "second brain" that got old after about the second time. I enjoy stories of Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione.
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  • From ANON - cofaym on December 22, 2003
    Okay, I know this story was written a while ago, but I just read it and have to make a few comments. Make no mistake, your story is good. However, the sex scene was off enough that someone who was really uninformed about sex might get the wrong idea. You were right about the condom, however, it takes several days for sperm to reach and fertilize an egg, so yeah, he could have found a spell in time. Also, there is no "safe" time of the month to have sex - there is always a chance of getting pregnant. Good use of Accio, I'll admit. Also, you need another term rather than "second brain" as it was repeated way too much. This is not meant to be a flame, just comments.
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