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Reviews for Fateful encounter.

By : Solaris
  • From ANON - HarmonyWeasley on July 06, 2003
    Absolutely grand!!! My fave ship!!! More!!!!
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  • From ANON - ravenclawboy203 on April 22, 2003
    Great fanfic!!!

    Keep it going
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  • From ANON - Spoonie on April 21, 2003
    I like the Harry/Ginny pairing, but it isnt very believably written. Virgins don't USUALLY say "Fuck me."
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  • From ANON - pr0 on April 15, 2003
    good job mate! kontinue the story, a little bit on the ungraphic side though, and 'suckle' should be replaced with nipped or sucked gently.
    continue the story
    gjob

    pr0
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  • From ANON - lordanur on March 27, 2003
    wow that was great i loved it wonderful

    i want more
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  • From ANON - Sam on March 24, 2003
    I suggest before delving into17 t17 territory, you do a little growing up of your own. Not to be snide, but you have a rather juvenile and clumsy style of writing, and some scenes are quite crude. Now, there's nothing really wrong with explicit sex, and God knows you gave sufficient warning to you readers, but consider checking grammar and spelling as well as the wording of the sex scenes.
    An interesting premise, however, and I would like to see it continued.
    Sincerely,
    Sam
    P.S. I heartily apologize if you found this review too critical; I only wish to improve the quality of Adultfic writing rather than supporting smut of the adolescent variety. I believe that adults, as well as having the maturity to write sexual situations for their characters, ought to have the maturity to write good and well-developed ploes. es. And here I am assuming you are, indeed, over 18.
    By the way, there's nothing wrong with the plot of this story, it promises to be interesting, indeed, and I meant it when I said I'd like to see a continuation.
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  • From ANON - clinton on March 18, 2003
    i think u should continue it
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  • From ANON - Sandy on March 14, 2003
    I really wish you would continue it. I'd love to find out what Herm and Ron are going to do with those photos.
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  • From ANON - sarahkjames on March 14, 2003
    Well, If you wanted constructive criticism, here it is. If English is your second language, you might want to know that the sentence "Ginny and her warmth as the bed started to moan and groan with the two lovebirds making love once again." is laughable. I think I understant waht you were trying to do, but it's wording is a little off. I liked that you had them use a condom (all about safety!) but maybe a more sensual approach would have been better. I would rate this fic about average, but it isn't horrible.

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