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Reviews for Indecent Proposal

By : AshleyZ
  • From ANON - ashlee on October 24, 2003
    This was awesome!! There is no need to worry if it was to long!! It was not boring at all and kept me wanting more!! It would be nice if there was a sequel. Though it is nice where it left off. I would like a sequel though because you are so good at writing that I would really enjoy it!!! I really like the way you write and I think I've read some of your other stuff too. It's a really good story and would be nice if you continued. Let me know if you do!! Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on October 21, 2003
    Definately need a sequel... Update soon! ;)
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  • From ANON - genrou on October 20, 2003
    im so glad that someone recommended this on the draco and hermione ml for would have skipped, and indeed have skipped it due to the fact that it lists only two chapters , and since aff.net doesnt list word count, i wouldnt have known it was of a decent length. the fic was great and cute and i wish to see more from you in the future. thanks.
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  • From ANON - HPfreak18 on October 16, 2003
    Beautiful story, i lvoed it alot. I am realy glad I got toread it because it was wonderful, very wonderful!!
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  • From ANON - campy_capybara on October 15, 2003
    Ashley, this is a most satisfying fic. I really enjoyed the interaction of Draco and Hermione. There was enough nasty!Draco, but he turned out well too. I know that the prophecy bit about Everett is too short, and quite unexplained, considering Hermione was identified by name, but I was willing to suspend my beliefs to just allow your words to flow. Excellent short fic, Ashley!
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  • From ANON - Yawning (not logged in) on October 14, 2003
    Fabulous story. Being a sneaky S.O.B. aside, I can see Hermione falling for Draco when he shows a kinder side. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Raphaela on October 14, 2003
    Bravo! This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I
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  • From ANON - Sky on October 14, 2003
    Very sweet! You did a great job with this -- I'm glad Hermione ended up happy in the end. :)
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on October 14, 2003
    I loved it! Draco and Hermione are still married and living happily with a son! *does the happy dance* Wonderful job and awesome love scene! Two thumbs up!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Arissa on October 14, 2003
    Wonderful story! Very good charcterisations.
    My only complain is, I wish the story would be longer. Reading "the end" made me a little sad :(

    I really really hope you
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  • From ANON - Joga on October 14, 2003
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 14, 2003
    Great fic. I love the silencing charm on Harry & Ron during the wedding. Good description of the feelings and the connection between Draco & Hermione. I liked that it was a challenge for both of them to rely on their emotions and gut instincts rather than just their intellect, which is their norm.
    Was sad to see it end & hope you write more D & Hr fics!
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  • From ANON - z26 on October 14, 2003
    This is a great short story. You could have drawn it out more if you wanted, but I think it is perfect just the way it is.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2003
    Great Honeymoon! And how sweet was Draco! A little baby boy! And Draco, the proud Father. But, THE END!! Really hated to see that!
    :(
    Hope to read another one of your stories in the future!

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2003
    That was a terrific job in writing!! Great plot and very easy to read! Can't wait to enjoy the next chapter!

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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