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Reviews for In the Eyes of the Enemy

By : Hunnypeach
  • From ANON - C.C. on November 21, 2003
    This is so sad. In fact I've read the 2nd story, and I hate Pansy Parkinson so muchleaslease let the children realize how much their real father and mother love them.
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  • From ANON - Talaymina on November 08, 2003
    AHHHHHHH!!! That was just cruel! Ok now that I got that out I am all better. I loved reading this stroy. Tnddindding was unexpected but am looking forward to reading the next one.
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on November 08, 2003
    This was a great fic. I loved the suprise ending! It was great the way you had them struggle a little. Too many fics rush right to the happy ending and you didn't do that. Great fic.
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  • From ANON - LadyTess on November 07, 2003
    OUTSTANDING STORY!!! I really like your take on Draco (I'm such a sucker for evil people turning good). I enjoyed your plot twists and had to read the story in one sitting I just had to see it through to the end. I can't wait till you start the sequel. I'm sure it will have as many twists and turns as it's predecessor. Keep up the outstanding work!!!
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  • From on November 06, 2003
    LOVE THIS STORY TO THE MAX!!!!!

    this story has an excellent plot!!!! i have never read a a whole complete fic. at one sitting. a friend told me about your story and i decided to look at it and see t wat was interesting....WOW, i was hooked in an instant;) as i was reading your story, i noticed that you like to describe everything in detail, i love when authors as yourself describe their stories in detail:) another aspect of the story that i quite enjoyed was that the characters where pretty much in cannon.
    overall, i liked the detail manner you intermingle everything and everyone, i found very interesting the twist of the whole thing that hermione is related to the weasley and dumbledore;) *cool*

    i hope you write the sequel a.s.a.p. pleaseeee!!! i need to know what happend to the babies??? how does hermione and draco cope with their loss??? will they still be together??? what is dedoredore going to do??? you have to post your story PRONTO!! there are too many question unanswered LOL!!!

    oh, by the way, when i started reading your story, i was at work and thank god my boss can't see what i do in my pc*big grin*
    the only negative side to this is that i had to take my work home because i didn't do any work today because i was reading your story LOL!!!! but, i don't feel bad at all....your story was totally worth it ;)

    hugs,

    LUMEN
    p.s. pretty please, can you e-mail me when you post the sequel??? bottyzapp@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 30, 2003
    GREAT STORY!!!! i love it! i can't wait for the next one to come out!!!! yikes, their kids were taken away from them.. i am biting my nails already!!!! please keep up the great work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - kella on October 25, 2003
    oh my lord! way to leave a huge twisty cliffhanger!
    that was evil.

    fabulous story, loved the plot and the character progression and i can't wait for the sequel!
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  • From ANON - jeannette on October 23, 2003
    i can't wait for your sequel.this story was really good,couldn't stop reading it.once i started reading i had to finish without interuption.
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  • From ANON - eeW on October 23, 2003
    I just have to say that I love your story:) But OMG!!!! You killed Madame Pomfrey!! No one kills her. Well I guess your story will be the first one I read that did it:) But seriously, I love this fic. Having the portraits of Draco and Hermione for their own rooms was a great idea. It was cute that after they "got together" that their portraits did also. I love a persistent Draco, and your's was very much so.

    There was just two things I noticed that might have been wrong.
    1. Lucius calls Draco and Hermione's baby a "half blood bastard child". Didn't he all ready know about her family history after he questioned her?
    2. Why does Draco have a wand when he runs into Hermione's room after she has a nightmare? Didn't Mcgonagall say that the wands would be locked up until Monday?
    I'm sorry if I am wrong, but if I'm not, I thought you might want to fix that:)

    I do you you write a sequel soon. I would love to read it:)
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 23, 2003
    I was only going to read part of this story & finish it tomorrow, but I couldn't wait;-) This is REALLY GOOD!!! I am hoping that you will start posting the sequel soon as I really want to know who has the twins (could it be someone - who - had - been - jarred?) & see who would be stupid enough to take on not only Albus & Harry, but also the entire Weasley clan!!!

    Could you PLEASE let me know when you post the sequel, my addy is

    SS_HG4Ever@yahoo.com

    TIA, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Kelly on October 22, 2003
    please Please write the next one as fast as u can i want to know what happend.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on October 22, 2003
    Holy shit! No frickin way!!!!! DAAAAAMN that's good... Update soon!
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  • From ANON - tas on October 22, 2003
    I just read your story. I enjoyed it, read it start to finish in one sitting. Can't wait to see what happened to the twins.
    - Terry
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 20, 2003
    Hunnypeach:

    Evil, Evil woman!
    How could you leave us hanging like that? ;D

    This is a really good story. It had some very interesting twists like Hermione's *heritage*. I liked that Draco, once he knew he loved Hermione was very determined about their relationship. I can't wait to read the sequel.

    One piece of constructive commentary: please make sure to use the spell & grammar check. I noticed quite a bit of wrong usage words: their for they're and wand for want. I don't know if you have a beta reader but these are just the things they search for.

    Your ideas have new twists on familiar themes and you clear can visualize lengthy and detailed stories, don't short change yourself by getting the the spelling/grammar messed up. The folks at CV are really helpful in this area.

    Congrats on the fabulous story!

    Jules
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  • From ANON - Jules on October 20, 2003
    I have read the first couple of chapters. I think there is something missing in chapter 3.
    I have really enjoyed this fic so far. I look forward to finding out about the secrets that Hermione's parents are keeping and how Draco's plan progresses. I will see if the 3rd chapter gets fixed in the next couple of days, otherwise I will just keep reading without it.
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