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Reviews for Caught by Mischief Managed

By : Kiristeen
  • From ANON - Jerrica on May 10, 2004
    The end? But I want more! Are you planning on writing a sequel? 'Cause you should. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - the zedmeister on May 07, 2004
    I just reread this for the umpteenth time and wanted to let you know how much I love it. I'm really looking forward to the next story!

    There's a detail that's really bugging me, though, in chapter 2.

    When Blaise is describing the need for a safeword to Draco, he goes:

    "And then, he pulls back, stands above you and pulls his wand."

    "What?!" Draco exclaimed, rudely wrenched from the delightful fantasy.

    This seems very off. A wand isn't just a weapon. Why would a wizard flinch when someone pulled a wand on them? It isn't a gun! (even though that wording "to pull it on someone," can suggest that association) Maybe I've been reading too many fanfics, but I should think that wand use would be very common during sex among wizards; there'd be no reason for Draco to assume that Harry was about to cast cruciatus on him, rather than, say, tie him to bedposts :D

    Like I said, it's a detail, but it really throws me out of the "wizarding world" setting.
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  • From sisko66002 on May 06, 2004
    That was a great story, both it and the one before it. Makes me feel sad that I didn't dver ver it a lot sooner. It was absolutely wonderful.
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  • From ANON - BlackVirgin on May 01, 2004
    How come you haven't updated i love your story!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on April 06, 2004
    So did Draco take Harry up on the offer? Are they found out? What happens? Does Draco come to enjoy being someone's pet? So much so that he wants Harry to "own " him for life? PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I would really like to see where this story line goes to and where it would end!!!

    Eagerly wanting more,
    Merrideth
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  • From rosy4president on March 13, 2004
    AWSOME!!!! i've read both parts and it's brilliant, the way you portrayed the characters was brilliant.... i just luv'd everyth Ple Please update soon with a trilogy or somethDah
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  • From ANON - Wonapalei on February 22, 2004
    Mmmmm. Yummy. Some of the absolute best Dom!Harry and Sub!Draco I've ever read. I particularly like that, as Harry says, "It's not about force; it's about control." No whips and chains, nothing painful or even really demeaning. Draco may be subservient, but he's a coddled pet--just like the spoiled kid he really is. I also like the slightly dark side of Harry. It's very believable; after all, he's had very little control over the rest of his life, so it makes sense that he'd want to keep some part of it aside where he can please himself as *he* wants. I'm hoping Draco manages to get over his pride and agree to the arrangement--though watching him struggle with it is very realistic as well. I was considering asking for a Harry POV, but on second thought, I'd actually rather not. He articulates his motives quite clearly while talking with Draco, and it strikes me that most of the actual change in character that takes place in this fic (and its prequel) occurs in Draco. It's his struggle with his pride, his initial refusal to accept his inner sub, his absolute shock at discovering the other side of Harry, and therefore his POV. Even if it develops into actual romance at some point, it'll still be Draco making most of the adjustments, since I doubt Harry's about to go join Voldemort, nor does he have a family to worry about. And he can always explain Draco as a "d" d" Death Eater to his friends and the public, without really going into detail. There's no way in hell that Draco will be able to explain this to his father or Voldemort, though, even if it doesn't develop into romance. But I'm getting ahead of myself. Please, please write more soon, or I shall be forced to create fanfic of your universe! And God knows I won't be able to come up with anything half as good as your writing. :)
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  • From ANON - Chubb on February 21, 2004
    While you're story is *certainly* not bad, at a lot of occasions, you had me rolling my eyes. Although I bet a lot of people would disagree, to me both your Harry and Drare are undeniably OOC- so much so, that in a number of scenes, I mentally cringed. Mischief Managed 1 and 2 had a lot of potential but I'm just not sure whether or not you reached it. I kept waiting for a point where you would redeem yourself in terms of the OOC but it just never happened. Putting that aside though, this is a pretty entertaining fic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - eleanoranne on February 15, 2004
    Oh, my. I love the dynamic between the boys in this series; I love Dom!Harry in general and the way you have written the tension between the two of them is just absolutely delicious. Please continue; I'm looking forward to the next in the series.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on February 07, 2004
    Oh dear lord...

    You must, by all means necessary, continue writing this story.

    It's wonderful. I'm sure more than just myself would appreciate, greatly, if you continued!

    It turned /me/ into a pile of goo! -Chuckle- Please, do!
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  • From ANON - Cam on February 07, 2004
    That was bloody awesome! I cannot wait until you post again. You are simply amazing and there are not woro deo describe my pleasure at fig a g a writer who is so in touch with her characters that she can create such a tapestry of emotions with them.

    I am waiting on baited breath for the next release.


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  • From ANON - Black_unicorn on February 07, 2004
    Harry is evil and in control . . . i like that. usually you read h/d fics where harry is the sub, but i like harry as the mas. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Black_unicorn on February 07, 2004
    Harry is evil and in contro . . . i like . us. usually you read h/d fics where harry is the sub, but i like harry as the mas. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Quiproquo on February 05, 2004
    The end? What do you mean
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on February 02, 2004
    Glad I final got to read the end of this one. i hope your muse sticks around long enough to get the
    third fic out. Illy lly want to "see" Harry "take" Draco. I loved the last two chapters of part two. They
    were HOT. It's so funny to see Draco struggleing to leave go of his control.
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