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Reviews for Come Undone

By : Seamasu
  • From BubblesFreak15 on November 28, 2012
    Man. These two are slow. Its taking them forever to just admit that it happened gor a reason. Stubnorn asses.
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  • From BubblesFreak15 on November 27, 2012
    I love this. So well written and intimant. Taking a long time to get the ball rolling so to speak but its worth every word.
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  • From BubblesFreak15 on November 26, 2012
    This is brilliant. So beautifully written and intamant.
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  • From Jags on September 18, 2009
    wicked
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  • From Jags on September 17, 2009
    i just finished ch 2 and i intend to keep reading. i just thought i should tell you it was good, you don't suck, try not to underestimate yourself
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  • From Starfall on July 20, 2007
    really wish this wasn't 3 years old since last update was a very enjoyable read and would love it if it was picked up again. =)
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  • From ANON - Media whore on January 13, 2007
    HEY those names of the chapters are from Placebo
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  • From ANON - Banner on June 16, 2006
    I just found this story, and I read it straight through chapt 10. It's now past midnight, and I don't regret the lost sleep at all. This is a wonderful story. It's intense, intelligent, creative. I love the way the boys are growing together. I really really appreciate the way you have kept them from making it all too easy. Harry and Draco are adolescents, and ones under tremendous pressure. Thanks for respecting that. This story just rocks.
    Great stuff.
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  • From ANON - Dragon_flame on January 26, 2006
    Amazing. I admire your dilagence in writing 181 pages worth. I seriously couldn't do that. The way you've placed the characters together are quite origional and it all makes for an interesting... no, fantastic read. I lOVE it so far, don't stop. ^_^ /
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  • From ANON - Alison on November 16, 2005
    Great story!! Are you going to update this anymore or did you drop it? Please Please continue it! =o)
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  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on November 15, 2005
    OMGWTF!!!! I was just clicking "next chapter" after I finished each and then BAM!! No more "next chapter" button!!! I actually shouted "The hell?!?" ROFL! You MUST update! I really really like this fic! It's extremely anjoyable and amusing, as well as angsty *grin*. It's a bit confusing in the dialogue because sometimes you forget to have the name of who's actually speaking/thinking. Aside from that, and the strange way that some random words are completely messed up...don't ask me how, it's GREAT! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2005
    Wow. Really good story. Very different. Very intense. I like the depth you're giving the characters. Why IS harry so moody, anyway?

    As others have mentioned, some of your sentences are being cut off. If you copy the text from your word processing program (such as Microsoft Word) and then paste into Note Pad or Word Pad, then paste or upload it here, that might help.
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  • From ANON - sallie on February 22, 2005
    I really Really REALLY like this story and hope you update soon!!!

    magic
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  • From ANON - Treck on May 28, 2004
    ARRG!
    More!
    Gimmy More!
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  • From ANON - Jerrica on May 05, 2004
    There are several sentences cut in half throughout the first chapter (perhaps every chapter - I don't know), and it makes the story a little hard to follow at times. You might want to fix that.
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