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Reviews for A Life More Ordinary

By : Lexin
  • From Madamdragon on September 04, 2010
    Oooo Snape needs his harry to fill up the empty bed. cant wait for an update soon i hope!
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  • From xmenfreak119 on May 24, 2010
    Hmm...I could definantly use some more on this story as well. I really enjoyed it! And I'm glad that Sev finally learned to enjoy sex! Heh!
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  • From ANON - LiT on September 16, 2008
    what... that can't be the end... *pouts* was soo looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - minn yun on August 16, 2008
    i wanted to accuse you of being one of JKR's in-circle, from the names you have in the story, you know. i honestly don't like DH's epilogue, as i'm certain none of us slashers do, but James and Albus, WTF??! and the smaller name Victoria/Victoire there, too! i've read ALMO some years ago, and i still can't point out what's special about it. coz it special all over. everything is. it's direct, and you let us interpret much just by ourselves. i'm a spoonfed kind of person, but somehow i love this. i should really hate the simplicity of ALMO, but i didn't. why? WHY???
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  • From Evermist on August 13, 2008
    NOT EVERMIST; CHELZI IN DISGUISE!!

    ...okay. i read this all in one sitting. it was amazing, if not a bit confusing sometimes. there were a lot of technical errors, but i could read through most of them, so it was alright. personally, i would have preferred to have had them fixed before posting, but it's not my story. ANYWAYS!!! the plot was interesting and the narration was very good. i genuinely enjoyed this story. i wasn't sure if it was complete as i read it, but when i got to the end-marking i felt it was a good way to finish it. great job, and i hope you continue to write. the only thing i think you really needed to fix was the technical errors (spelling, punctuation, ect.). otherwise, it was a terrific story!~
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  • From Kip on July 13, 2008
    Really lovely. An enthralling tale that draws the reader effortlessly along (except that there do seem to be a few glitches in the text in places) and utterly captivates, while remaining wonderfully faithful to the characters, most especially the snarky Potions Master. Thank you! 'Purr
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  • From ANON - Jilliane on January 01, 2007
    Have I possibly read a longer version of this story on another site? I love this story. It's definitely one of my favourites and one of the better written ones on this site. I've read it several times and will again several more. I think it's exceptionally well written, even with the typos. You've kept Harry and particularly Severus in character, with well written lines for Severus that I have no problem imagining him speaking. I just really, REALLY love this story. Thank you so much for it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2005
    I really love this story but i can't help but feel it's incomplete, i guess i just want to read more. This is really a great story one of the best i've read in a long time. ^__^
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  • From ANON - sh2743 on April 30, 2005
    not much of an ending, is it?? hmmm.. well, it was interesting...
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2004
    what do you mean it's slash? severus is a girl down there not a guy!
    ?
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  • From alchemicprincess on December 14, 2003
    Lexin...omg..you managed to capture everything! No lose ends nothing! It's perfect and i love it, i was quite shocked when Sev fell pregnant again...but it was a lovely idea. So cooto's to you Lexin! Cooto's!
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  • From ANON - Mary Potter on December 14, 2003
    are YOU GOING TO MAKE A SEQUEL ???? PLEASE SAY YOU WIL...........
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