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By : singtoangels
  • From ANON - MistressCinder on March 26, 2016
    That was sooooo hot!!!
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  • From dreamer24 on November 30, 2008
    OMG,this was hilarious.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on August 23, 2007
    '"Who says it has to be a girl?" Fred asked slyly as he slid a casual hand over Hermione's rump.

    George jolted upright. "Mum would kill us!"

    "Not if she didn't know."

    "Who do you have in mind?" George hesitantly inquired. He settled back onto his bed and beat his pillow a few times.

    Fred smirked. "No one in particular."

    . . .

    "Let's just say, Forge, that if Ronnikins ever crosses us, Malfoy's going to have his hands full."'

    *WEG* = *Wicked Evil Grin* *Smirk* I love these two, they are such yummy, wicked studs *GRIN*
    ;D
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  • From ANON - Lilliputian722 on January 28, 2006
    Awesome story. I really enjoyed this....who knew Fred & George could be so devious and hot? Way to go.
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on October 04, 2005
    Wow...just wow..I love your work,please keep at it!
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  • From qtgrl1129 on January 20, 2005
    Uh, Ron and MALFOY??!!!
    OKAY...
    Fred and George (or should I say, Forge and Gred, respectively) soitinly have an active imagination!
    Seccond chappie/sequal please!!!!
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  • From ANON - don\'t wanna be a virgin on December 29, 2004
    i love those twins...way to fuck, hermione!i wish they would fuck me...
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  • From on July 21, 2004
    hahahaha!!!!!!!!!! That was wonderful...and nI haI hate Hermione!
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  • From ANON - Alicia on July 02, 2004
    WONDERFUL!Completely Wonderful!I was kinda wishing you woulda wrote more though.But its good anyways!
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  • From ANON - Angelfeather on March 08, 2004
    Oh my. I'm not one for twincest, but this was a delightful (as in hot enough to make me squirm) twist. Sharing Hermione...nice. Great job. --Beth
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  • From ANON - Jaid on December 22, 2003
    Oi, I must admit I am highly jealous of the girl... Two gorgeous guys... Although I do pity Malfoy. *snicker* I don't wish Ron on anyone...


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  • From ANON - Sky on December 19, 2003
    Oh my heck that was sexy. I really love Fred and George in het situations, especially together with a girl. This is a fabulously sexy story and you're such a good writer, too. The whole paragraph about the peach and teh juice dribbling down your hand -- that was inspired! What a beautiful way to describe it. (I'm also a Remus/Hermione shipper and I'm off to read your story Savage Heat!) If you have an archive or updates list, please add me. This is such a wonderful story. I'm going to save it for later reading. Fred and George were exceptionally naughty! Do you have any other F/G stories where they're in a threesome? The image of Hermione between them is really hot! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Ardeo on December 18, 2003
    When I first read this, I was a bit apprehensive, and I was quite sure that FW/HG/GW would squick me entirely. While reading it, however, the thoughts that occurred to me were not: "Oh, that's disgusting" or "That's so gross." It was more along the lines of: "This is really well-written" and "Wow, this is great." It was just hot, I guess. A lot of threesome fics are just *there.* They don't have any basis at all, they seem entirely unlikely, and the characters are totally OoC. Granted, I don't think threesomes are likely to happen under any circumstance in the HP world, but this fic just made it seem entirely plausible and likely. Almost like it should happen, ha ha. Now *that* would be an amusing bit to have show up in one of the books. I don't have much criticism to offer . . . maybe it would have been nice to get some deeper Hermione-thoughts. But that's really not a big thing at all. More like an extra bonus. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading it, and more in the future would be a pleasant surprise. *Hint, hint* :)
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  • From ANON - Lessa on December 18, 2003
    That was absolutely evil! I just loved it. So this was a prequel to another story? Can't wait to read it and see what happens next. You know I almost feel y foy for Ron but think the idea of Draco having to deal with lovesick Ronnikins sounds pretty darn funny.


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  • From ANON - shaolin on December 18, 2003
    Yes, more! I love the twins...Weasleys make me weak
    weekly!!! Any more or is that the end? More!
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