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Reviews for The Retreat

By : HPRndRobin
  • From ANON - Jasmine on June 04, 2014
    Hey is there something missing between chapter 6 and chapter 7? It goes from the twins and snape plotting over the candy to a high speed car chase. This part seems a little odd to me.....
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  • From HarryVik on August 18, 2007
    good chapter however i didn't like the beginning, what happen at the party?
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  • From ANON - Curious on June 27, 2005
    This chapter (8) is baaad..."he
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  • From ANON - Curious on June 26, 2005
    Another Chapter by Corgi and another error...hmmm "Haaskeasked as."
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  • From ANON - Previously Formerly Disappointed, Now Curious on June 26, 2005
    This chapter 6, has no error. Hmmm
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  • From ANON - Formerly Disappointed on June 26, 2005
    I am hoping there is something wrong when this is uploaded. There was a mistake," So
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  • From ANON - Disappointed on June 26, 2005
    I am really disappointed about the errors. Corgi is one of my Fav authors on HP Fandom, and seeing things like "grasby Mby Molly Weasley" just makes me don't know what to think. I love the story though!
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  • From Crystal56 on June 30, 2004
    So Sweet! That was acutally a wonderful story and I loved reading it!
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  • From LeeLeePotter on February 03, 2004
    I knew Severus wanted to get rid of her, but don't you think that's a bit m lol lol Bleed Tramp Bleed!!! Ha ha ha ha sorry, it's way to late to make much sense. Just read all six chapters. Now I can't wait to see if Harry blames Severus for taking out the tramp who lived, or didn't. *shrug* LOL
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  • From ANON - Miki on January 22, 2004
    i have one idea for a thing the t mak make for that stupid girl.. Truth Telling Tarts... so she eats one she starts telling the truth about things. well just an idea. thought i would share. well later great story.

    miki
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on January 03, 2004
    Great story. Please keep it up. Hope Harry doesn't get too heartbroken.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2003
    more, more
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