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Reviews for Out of Harm\'s Way

By : BrightColors
  • From ANON - arianwen on October 19, 2005
    Remus is not a pervert! Sigh. At least *I* don't think so;) More, pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Loubie on February 12, 2005
    This is very sweet and fluffy. Please update:)
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  • From ANON - Nee on January 08, 2005
    Decent but the chapters are little more than paragraphs. All three of these could be one chapter.
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  • From ANON - kimi on December 11, 2004
    I love your story, can't wait for another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anntar on November 26, 2004
    Sweet. I like the idea of them spending some time together :) I can't wait to read more. I love Remus/Hermione fics.
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  • From ANON - Tawney on September 08, 2004
    Very Cute I loved it, I am writing one too, on FF.NET. Keep it up and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bellaireland on February 04, 2004
    I want to say that is a great start to a fic... I can't wait to read more.

    About the formatting, I noticed you had no spaces between it. If you are uploading a htm document and it isn't working right, just upload it, then go to edit chapter. You can edit it and add in all the spaces. I have to do that with all my fics. Other than that, it's a great start!

    Bella Ireland
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  • From ANON - GlindaTrisstt on February 04, 2004
    A very interesting start. I like the 'two away from the world' theme. I'm looking forward to more.

    That said, I would like to give some critical advice. Please go back and give your writing some breathing room. Spaces are a good thing ! It makes for a much more readable text. Every time someone speaks is a new paragraph and every new thought is a paragraph. Also make sure to let the reader know who is speaking. It is obvious to you because the scene is playing out in your head, but the reader does not alway know.

    Other than that, the content is good and story looks to be going well.

    Waiting for more .....

    Glinda
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