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Reviews for Depraved Pleasures

By : SevisWoman
  • From S4 on February 24, 2012
    This is Lucius/hermione. U should change your character setting or warn ppl in summary that this is not dramione
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  • From kitten224 on June 21, 2008
    interesting i wonder where this will go hmmm? please update soon alright
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  • From ANON - Kagome Freak on December 14, 2006
    ok well...this is suppose to be DRACO/HERMOINE not Lucuis. There wasnt Draco in the story once, so i suggest that you change the catagory of this story.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Happy Jade on February 10, 2004
    If I were you I would proceed to read my stories before I expected other people to, that way I would know if it actually made sense. The sex was...okay...but the rest of your writing was bally lly just filler. The lead in was horrible and I suggest you rewrite in an attempt to make it flow. Honestly - if you want to write about sex, don't bother with plot until you know you can manage it well. It just makes you sound like you have no idea what you are doing and obviously not mature enough to handle the subject.

    BTW, how the hell does Fionnn sound like Fin? Creative attempt at a name, but way to confusing. If you need to tell your readers flat out, then exclude it. Your writing should do the talking for you!
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