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Reviews for On A Mission

By : Hermione
  • From ANON - Anna on March 21, 2004
    Interesting its a good story but it needs more depth its to speratic. it would be cool it you went more in to it.
    *Shrugs*
    Oh randome note.... you dont pick your form it more or less picks you. thus peter the rat.. Yeah anyways like the story good job.

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  • From ANON - adonia on March 17, 2004
    wow this storys great, a little hard to read but really auesom. Please update soon i cant wait to hear what she says

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  • From ANON - anonymous on March 17, 2004
    Please update soon!
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  • From on March 17, 2004
    great story. please continue it.
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  • From ANON - Sasha on March 14, 2004
    I like it, but you need detail....detail is what makes up a great story. Don't hit me! *ducks*
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  • From ANON - jeannette on March 13, 2004
    i hope you continue with this story,it's a really good beginning.
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  • From ANON - dem on March 13, 2004
    Oh harsh cliff hanger! please update soon. ^^
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