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Reviews for A Dangerous Game

By : Rorry
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 23, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From on August 23, 2004
    ooo this is gettin goooooood. i wanna see what happens next so update!!!

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  • From ANON - riss on April 14, 2004
    very nice

    the quality of the writing (grammer, spelling, etc.) can be worked on but it really doesn't matter.. i totally look past that!

    this story is ADDICTING!! you've started some really really great ideas and i'd loveee to see them develop and have the story advance!!

    keep it up, please!!!!

    i hope i helped!

    xo
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  • From ANON - DracoGrl on April 14, 2004
    Please write more?? I want to find out what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - Lola245 on April 14, 2004
    Fun! I like the phone idea! Write soon!
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  • From Rorry on April 07, 2004
    Thank you and please continue to review! :)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on April 07, 2004
    Interesting premise... the fact that you changed Hermione's character over the summer made the plot much more real.
    My only problem is the lack of proofreading. Um, taught instead of 'thought' - I caught that one quite a few times. I dunno... those type of mistakes jump out at me (I'm also a writer), and when I'm reading a really hot scene and I come across one - it's like a splash of cold water. lol
    So, that's just my suggestion.
    Otherwise, it's a good piece... very AU... but that just makes it better!


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  • From ANON - Carrie on April 06, 2004
    yah Blaise, i luv him, more please
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  • From Rorry on April 06, 2004
    Thank you soou much for your reviews!!!
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  • From ANON - Kinky Girl on April 05, 2004
    This fic has potential but I think you need a beta reader to check typos and stuff.
    Write more.

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  • From Kiwi on April 05, 2004
    What are you waiting for girl? UPDATE DAMMIT!!!
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