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Reviews for Initiation

By : kjsparkles
  • From ANON - Stacey on September 28, 2006
    great beginning, would love for it to be continued!
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  • From ANON - Answers on January 19, 2006
    I really like this story, i dont know why all the others haven't reveiwed. Will you update because i have? I hope so, cause it'd be a shame if you didn't!!
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  • From ANON - Vicky on January 04, 2006
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - lu on July 17, 2005
    wow really creative writing
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  • From ANON - are you a review whore? on March 14, 2005
    alright here is a review.
    for
    every
    line
    you
    must
    write
    a
    new
    chapter
    this
    is
    thirteen
    14 chapters
    15 so
    16 far
    17 get
    18 crackin

    oh btw email me when you update.
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  • From ANON - Blackat on December 28, 2004
    Dammit will you hurry up and update
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  • From ANON - James on October 21, 2004
    WOW! I like your story. in the story hermione figures she would be a spy for the order and join voldermort, she told snape that she could imagine the worst that could happen to her. duh! being a woman who admittedly at least in the story has only been with 2 boys and they bored her and for the first time gave draco her first blow job, she has no idea what she is about to get into...

    Hermione is so smart, but in this story she is so dumb.... I cant wait to read the next stories. but I would of done things differently, I would of had voldermort give her a choice to either kill a whole innocent family of muggles or get in a circle of men, strip and show off all of her body and then take each man in every way possible. mouth, ass, pussy. and she could take 3 guys at once, a bunch of times, pull a train. have her take at least 20 or 30 guys or maybe more. and her reaciton to the choices and the sex would of been great....

    Hope you get enough reviews so you will keep posting..... great idea, well written too......
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  • From ANON - Ray on August 27, 2004
    Interesting. I cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 28, 2004
    what will it take to make you update
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  • From ANON - Chris on July 20, 2004
    hi great so far
    when will the next bit be up?
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  • From on July 10, 2004
    Hello. I liked your story. The story is written in a pac pace an's 's very descriptive. Please update. :)
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  • From ANON - Mark on May 21, 2004
    This story has a lot of potential.

    I wonder just how much they will break Hermione's will.

    Will Voldemort himself get involved or will only the DE raper her?

    Hope you keep updating.

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Morgan on April 27, 2004
    This story is GREAT!! I just started reading it today, 4-27-04, but i really like it. Please update it soon because I really want to know what happens! GREAT STORY =)
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  • From ANON - MuisD on April 22, 2004
    Hot, Hot, Hot. Can't wait for chapter 3. Felt Hermione's first BJ on Draco was too easy.
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  • From ANON - XxphenixX on April 22, 2004
    Very nice, my dear. You're awfully good with this suspense thing, aren't you? I like that you're realistic about Voldemort and the Death Eaters... I'm sick of it being depicted as a picnic. This rock thing is interesting, definitely more "fun" for the boys than the Imperius... I wonder who's first. I'm slightly annoyed by how much Draco is used in this so far, I feel like Voldemort might make someone else, someone she knows less and fears more, tell her about the Inner Circle and whatnot... but at the same time I understand that heht wht want to use someone she knows for just that reason. But anyway, I really do like this fic and I can't wait to see where you go with it... update!
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