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By : PJBender
  • From ANON - katsunie on December 30, 2006
    this is a really good story and i like to say that if some how you could continue this or mabey write another verion it would be great.
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  • From ANON - Sara on June 22, 2005
    Lily/Squid? Not *exactly* my usual pairing, though it was tastefully done. I appreciate the more realistic look at Lily's "first time" -- too many fics paint it as something magical and mind-blowing, when in actuality, it's sticky and uncomfortable. I encourage you to look over a couple of rough spots in syntax near the beginning with a beta. Keep writing! :)
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  • From ANON - erin on March 26, 2005
    that was interesting. man, james is an ass! he prolly didnt even know that it was her first time. man, damn him! well, in any case, good story
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  • From ANON - kasey on March 16, 2005
    seems like a good start. write longer chapters and it seems you could have a long running story here
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2004
    FINISH IT
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  • From ANON - silvercat on August 04, 2004
    As odd as that story was, I don't like to flame people, so.. I can say only that that was definately NOT beastality, so if you promise, you should come through. Otherwise, that was a decent story!
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on July 25, 2004
    Well...that was...interestring...

    AS YOUR PRINCESS! I COMMAND YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY *bashes author over the head withpterpter and drags their computer*
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on July 25, 2004
    Awwww, that was a very sweet ending to part one...is there going to be a part 2? *crosses arms and taps foot*
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  • From ANON - Raffy on April 30, 2004
    This fic is recommended by a friend of mine and I must say I
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