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Reviews for Bittersweet

By : zephyrs1desire
  • From wudelfin on August 18, 2007
    even with the typos and gramatical errors, this piece deserves a sleepy smile. thax for shairing.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - KanSol on June 22, 2005
    The perfect R fic.
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  • From ANON - sarah j on October 10, 2004
    Hermione's FRIENDS better stick up for her or they are true friends, but selhish hypocrites! Stupid Ron! *Spits on Ronald Weasley* Great story.
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  • From ANON - Tandy on July 20, 2004
    That was awesome. Very nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Sugar-coated Sushi on May 31, 2004
    I really love this fic and I never seem to tire reading it. It still moves me everytime I do. I would love it if you would write another fic about what happened in between those ten months. I mean, what did everyone say esp. Ron and how did they fall in love or what did they feel about each other because I just so love the last part when you said that Hermione accepted Draco and never looked back. So umm...please? :)
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  • From ANON - Raffy on May 07, 2004
    What a remarkable story!
    It touched me deeply and at the same time, aroused me as well!*impish smile*

    He ran his thumb down the length of the panties over her hidden treasure and when his finger brushed her clit, a keening moan again escaped her. Soon, he was enthralled by the reactions he was pulling from her sleep-induced passion as he rubbed her clit harder throher her panties. She bucked under his hand and he could feel her center grasping and pulsing. He pressed his palm to cover her, letting her thrusting body find its release. At the height of her climax she moaned a name his name. Her eyes began to flutter and he bolted fearing that she had come awake.

    Oooh
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  • From ANON - Chevy on May 05, 2004
    I also liked this story. I loved your take on Draco, it seemed to fit him so well. Although, I too wish you had filled in the missing 10 months, but I understand it is the authors choice as to what they put in their story. I hope the person you wrote this for is very pleased with it :o)
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on April 29, 2004
    I didn't even read the second page, and now don't I feel like an ass. I only meant it in the most flattering, you write smut beautifully, way I could say it without actually saying that I'm jealous as hell...hehehe, because I am. Great romantic story. You owe not a thing! End your stories the way you see fit! Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - jkrazed on April 29, 2004
    I too am interested in that 10 months! Keep it in mind next time you finish a story and need a filler!
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  • From SandraM on April 27, 2004
    Wow! I'm impressed... right down to my size 8 sneakers.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on April 27, 2004
    Opps! That was story. Can anyone out there bata read these things for me? LOL!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on April 27, 2004
    What happened? Was this supposed to be a one shot story? If so, you did only okay. Why? Because there is so much here that has to be told to us! Putting the ending of the story like that was a rip off to your readers! TEN MONTHS LATER? Oh please! You have a good stoy here and it is clear that you are a good writter. Work the story, tell us what happened in those ten months. Otherwise all I get out of it as a reader is that you were too lazy to do the work and are depending upon me as the audience to do it for you.
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  • From ANON - Sugar-coated Sushi on April 27, 2004
    This is brilliant! Itwas beautifukky written! I love how Draco was bitter without being overemotional and melodrmatic. And everyone had forgotten that he had saved Harry Potter'slife was unique.

    And the last part was sweet without being fluffy and I love that.

    And the fact that he wasn't the perfect Malfoy anymore but Hermione still accepted and loved him just melted my heart.

    I simply love it.

    ~Sushi


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