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Reviews for Dianthus Stories

By : icewomin
  • From AlabasterPrincess on October 23, 2008
    I love your story and original characters, but there seems to be a fair bit of text missing from quite a few chapters and though sometimes I can guess what it was about, sometimes it's a huge jump in the plot and i feel I've missed too much, particularly chaps 24 and 25. just thought I'd let u know that a small error is harming an otherwise excellent story so you can fix it. :)
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  • From ANON - Amerina on November 28, 2006
    you would have a great story if u finished the chapters half of u'r chapters are cut up with the ending oviusly missin.
    I can no longer read it because it is so confusing.
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  • From dancingnaked on May 30, 2004
    I am really suprised to see only two reviews, considering I think this is a really good story. The characters are well-developed. The sex scenes are well-written. I love fanfictions that have Snape in them but it's so had finding a decent one to read. I think this is a great story. Are you going to add more to the story? The title of chapter 41 makes it sounds like it is the end of the story. Hm. Anyway, you're a great writer!
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  • From ANON - Pauline on May 16, 2004
    I have very much enjoyed reading "Dianthus Stories" and the companion piece from Snape's POV. The idea of the ring was brilliant , and a lovely way to get them together without the usual dithering that getting the characters to realise they both love each other entails. I wouldn't mind one of those. I loved the way you developed Dianthus and her friends and the depiction of Snape in his first year of teaching was believable and sympathetic. Wonderful stories and excellent characterisations. Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - Summer on April 30, 2004
    Oh Wow! I have just spent the better part of two days reading this. Your original characters are so well developed. I just loved all of her girlfriends. The story itself is just wonderful. It is nice to see a fic written for a young Severus. Is this the end though, or are you going to tell the story through the next 10years and the rise of Voldemort? I would love to know what happens to our lovely couple in the meantime. Absolutly wonderful! Cant wait to read more, if there is more.(please let there be more)
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