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Reviews for Loving is a understatement

By : juliarose
  • From dragongirl40 on May 14, 2010
    this is awesome. please keep writing.
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  • From LadySilver on June 30, 2009
    I like this story so far, I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on August 10, 2006
    I think that you did a good job with this first chapter. I also think it's a shame that you never continued this story.
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  • From ANON - Rally Breath on November 28, 2005
    If ur that fucking poor, then why can u pay the net??
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  • From ANON - Bealmira on October 19, 2005
    Hey, here's some helpful criticism. This looks very first-draft-y. Using spell check will make it a little easier to understand. Try reading it aloud to yourself as well, before posting it. It can help you to smooth out any choppy sounding sentences and catch any spelling errors your computer might have missed. Be careful of your _homophones_ as well. Capitalize names(i.e. Fred), the beginning of sentences, and abbreviations(CD). Also watch your commas, make sure they're in the right place. I hope my review will help you improve your future writing.
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  • From ANON - Katharos on August 09, 2005
    Nice prologue.
    I espcially like where Bill put Ron in a tree. *snicker*
    Pleeeeaasssse update soon. I'd like to read more of your story. Actually, I'd like to see Harry and Snape have a heated argument and then Snog but since that's part of the story......yeah.
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  • From ANON - Loki on October 25, 2004
    I like it so far it would be better if I knew......(crikits chirp in the silence)........(Loki looks from side to side)........(looks at computer top to bottom under the computer and behind the computer)..............(O.OLoki looks up)....wheres the rest of it chi. Wheres the tenticle smut. Come on sing it with me " I Want some teeennty suy suum tteeenty smutttty giiive me some yooaai soome yoai smut wiith teennttyy make it nice and juicey I waant som (Loki's song and manic dacing get short cut short rather sudenly. By her split personality Embrium hiting her in the fore head with a rolled up news paper) Embrium : HENTAI! Loki: Owie!! OOOOooh Em I didn't know you liked it rough:). Em: -_- You do remember you straight right? Loki: (Big grin):) Yah I know I am straight but I think our case would be more like weird masterbation....you know same person different personality. Em: O_o OOOOoook! ; #1 thats just to much info and insight into the way your twisted mind works, and #2 why are you in such a hyper hentai mood!!!! Loki: HA! HA! HA! 1st of all its kinda your mind to (Em: Don't get any more complicated than you already are.)Oookay and 2nd of all..............Em:YES!.... Loki:?yes what?.....Em:2nd all *>.
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  • From ANON - RedboneShawty07 on September 23, 2004
    well first thing's first. Do not just fly into the plot like that. Also loved the part when Bill is yelling at ron (^.^) give it time, ya kno the meeting wit Snape, like make it when skool starts in his office while the Sorting ceromony is goin on. C'mon man, now here I am, goin around Adultfanfiction.net just GIVING away my own ideas that i could put into my own fanfic rite here on the site. The name is by the way is "New Developements". Check it out by the way.
    ~1~
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  • From ANON - Memororis on July 20, 2004
    I would be happy to read more of this story idea of yours 'cos I love Harry/Snape-pairing.
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  • From Crystal56 on June 30, 2004
    That's sweet...Mrs. Weasly the understanding one...Ha...well, in GoF, she jumped to conclusions a little fast...
    Still a very good story though...!

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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on May 06, 2004
    You're doing a good job but there are some things I must mention. First of all you are going to need a beta to refine what you have written. During some of the passages that you had in your story, it was unclear what you were trying to say. Secondly you need to try and shoot for at least one thousand words per chapter. If you want I can beta for you but I am not the best one in the world. My email is timegrimmors@yahoo.com if you want to take me up on my offer.
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  • From ANON - Laney on May 03, 2004
    hey, i didn't check to see if you got your one review already or not, but i'll review anyway. feel special, dude, i don't review many stories.
    um...so yes, i'm reading it, and it looks like it could go places and i wanna see how it turns out, so you better as hell be continueing this!
    the only peeve that i have about it is that for some reason or another it goes very long horizontal wise and i'm forced to move bottbottom cursor...but maybe that bugs me cuz i'm lazy...hm...always a possibility, lol. plus some of the spelling stuff is...odd...if you want a beta or something, i'd be willing to go through...though i'm mostly only good for grammer and spelling and the like...drop me an e-mail if you're interested (and no, i will *not* be offended if you don't take me up on the offer)
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