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Reviews for Harry and the fun summer that can only get better

By : Madeline
  • From ANON - Maddy on May 15, 2004
    This looks promising. But you need to punctuate and spell check. Try getting a beta, and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - cofaym on May 14, 2004
    grammar and spellcheck are on your computer for a reason. Commas are a good thing. Re-post this when you've proofread it!
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  • From ANON - k on May 14, 2004
    its an ok story but u need to proof read or get a beta.
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