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Reviews for A Winter Tale

By : Bylle
  • From ANON - Sherrafina on June 03, 2004
    I would love to try to read it. Those weird quotation marks throw me off though. Could you change them?????
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  • From ANON - Claribel on June 02, 2004
    This is such a lovely tale. I was apprehensive, not sure what to expect, but I think you have handled it so well - not at all squicky. I find myself almost wishing that she would accept him as he is - part of being in love, I think, but it's probably too soon and I'm sure would make some people squick. Still, I too wish you had more reviews. Why don't you move it to the main HP bit - it isn't really a marriage law fic (that is a Snape/Hermione challenge after all) and so many people post their challenge responses in the main section I'm sure no one would object. It's a proper story after all, not a one chapter piece of flu Gi Give it a go!
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  • From ANON - madamsprout on May 31, 2004
    Squeal! It's so nice to see your story up. I only wish more people would read it, and review. I have come to so enjoy this story and yes: at first I thought....Max, how are you going to pull this 'story-line' off. But dear, you've done it in spades

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    You've taken a subject, and a story that would make people say 'oh my goodness I can't read this' and made a very romantic love story of it. You show two people who have been thrown into an awful situation and yet, these people have flourished in it. Hermione is a picture of courage, and devotion with her dealing with Albus. You've shown a side of Albus that would make JKR smile he's not a 'dirty' old man, but one who is uncertain of his relationship with someone song, ng, and yet he felt a sense of obligation, of duty to help her. You've shown him to be shy, apprehensive and at time embarrassed about his body, and his feelings.

    I look forward to reading more of your work and hope more people have a look and see what wonderful story this is turning out to be.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on May 29, 2004
    I never thought I would like a story about Hermione and Albus, but your story has changed my mind. Even with the age difference it's not as squicky a relationship as I had imagined. They seem to fit together in this story. I have to wonder about the potions project for Hermione though. Is that Albus' way of getting Hermione and Severus together after he is killed? Looking forward to more of this soon.
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