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Reviews for All Right Harry

By : Mrpointyhorns
  • From noxlumen on December 19, 2009
    As much as I love Colin, your posting has such major problems that I can't follow the plot. While I suspect you wrote a perfectly good plot, reading this is kind of like reading a book that someone ripped half of the pages out of at random and I think it may be a glich in the site rather then your writing skills. At the time I read this, Harry never says anything to Colin but he's suddenly avoiding Harry, he never says anything to Ron and Hermione about the relationship, nothing seems to be done about Filch raping Colin, and the story randomly jumps from the The Burrow to the jokeshop, then jumps from everyone with dragon eggs in The Burrow to Percy randomly loseing his soul and people who weren't even at the burrow talking. There are also odd nonsensical chunks like this: /p p class=MsoNormal
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  • From bill560682 on April 16, 2009
    i think you somehow forgot all of chapter 11 altogether.
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  • From bill560682 on April 16, 2009
    you seem to have slight problem with chapter 8. it just seems to skip a whole section, one minute nora the dragon is gone and the next see is back and it seems to be right after a battle with the dementors. an the transition between them is just missing.
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  • From bill560682 on April 16, 2009
    now i like it when people say that the twins were able to turn harry's 1,000 gallions into 10,000 or even 20,000 gallions and that is how they could afford a shop in diagon alley. since they were not only selling pranks to hogwarts but the other 2 schools in the tri-wizard tournament.
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  • From bill560682 on April 15, 2009
    as far as snape goes i would have his sorry ass charged with sttemped murder of every student who ever blew up a potion in his class.snape is listed as a potions master but can not stop 1st years potions from getting blown up? an no dumbledore would not be able to save snape because he would be charged as well for letting it happen.
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  • From bill560682 on April 15, 2009
    this is my favorite pairing, the only problem is i would see it going more like this. harry/creevey brothers as to how harry ends up with the creevey brothers is simple, they want pictures of harry and thereby have to pay for them. you want a picture then start sucking, you want that picture to be signed then bend over and spread those ass cheeks. an if he also charges them 5 gallion for the picture plus 5 gallions to sign it then not only does harry get sex but could make a good bit of money from them as well. of course how it starts is in harry's first year he meets the annoying creevey brothers who in this story are twins. they constantly nag harry about wanting his picture so he figures to offer them a deal he thinks they will never go for. unknown to harry the creevey brothers think this is just a dream come true. sex with harry potter and pictures and all that for only 10 gallions each.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - kathy on July 04, 2004
    jo!! I loved it!! I really like this coupbut but there are so little fics of them!! Hope you continue it soon.
    Kisses, kathy
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