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Reviews for A school trip turns into a great 2 nights

By : Ohbaby125
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2005
    Blown Away
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  • From on June 28, 2004
    *cough* i must agree with everyone else..this story has no plot so really it is, is lame porn...you have some really corny lines in the fic and i find quite funny but sad at the same time. Draco and hermione are my favorite pairings so please do them justice by taking this story down and revise+get a beta
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  • From ANON - sherrafina on June 28, 2004
    OK. Someone is just making all this up right??? This isn't a REAL story is it???? If it is, than this has to be the most pathetic attempt yet. I will NEVER say that I am a good writer. I am definately NOT. But neither are you! How old are you???????
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  • From ANON - sherrafina on June 28, 2004
    OK. Someone is just making all this up right??? This isn't a REAL story is it???? If it is, that htis to bto be the most pathetic attempt yet. I will NEVER say that I am a good writer. I am definately NOT. But neither are you!
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  • From ANON - Draco_luva on June 26, 2004
    wow.... kinky
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  • From ANON - a writing teacher on June 26, 2004
    Could you at least spell Hermione's name correctly? Is that too much to ask? Dt yot you have copies of the books you could check?

    Writing gets better with practice, so you don't have to stop entirely, but you're not ready to share your work with the public. Give it a few more years (like when you're over 18).

    Sorry.
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  • From ANON - Nate on June 26, 2004
    Please please PLEASE stop writing this second!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2004
    Wow.. Ummmm wow.

    Takeing a bus ride all the way to New York from England.. Nice trip..

    Think of ever looking at a globe..

    I'd say better luck next time but i fear for whoever reads the next one... Thats like a Pwp with no porn or plot its just there...

    Next time try haveing someone beta it and then from there if its not anybetter.... Burn it
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