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By : anthemonessa
  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2011
    An interesting story with a lot of potential, a pity that you apparently abandoned it.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - wiccagurl on March 15, 2005
    Cool Story! Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - ILOVEDAVIDARQUETTE on January 29, 2005
    I think this is a really good story and hope you continue soon.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 06, 2005
    Chapter 6: I don't know why you aren't satisfied with this chapter. I liked it. I think it finally gave a proper depiction of Dumbledore. Everyone loves him, and let's face it, he just pisses me off. His high handed way have always made me very angry. The fact that he does what he thinks is right for people is his only saving grace. I really have never liked the way that he has treated Snape, as if Severus was not putting his own life in danger every time he returning to the Dark Lord. Personally I think it would be complete justice if he was able to strike the final blow to Lucius just before the Dark Lord fell at the hands of Harry. But he is another that I have mixed feelings for. I completly dislike Ron most of the time. But that is a whole other story.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 06, 2005
    So now here is sit patiently or should I say Impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait too much longer. It is good. Can't wait to see if or how they are going to fall for each other.
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  • From ANON - magicalwonder on January 06, 2005
    Second Grade Religious studies, what do they say about still waters running deep. LOL. I really like the story so far. And if that is how you teach, I would have liked Religion in school. Secondly, I can hardly wait to find out what she thinks about which Order member they chose for her. I still have three more chapters up ready to be read, but after finding out you teach 2nd grade, I could not resist a review. Good Job.
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  • From ANON - KD on January 02, 2005
    Hey, what's this about Canada eh?
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  • From ANON - KD on January 02, 2005
    Hey, wow that was good. The characterization is really good and the plot is good. I want to find out what happens wit Hermionie and Severus. How will they get along? I hope you update soon because I am dying to read it. It gives me something to look forward too in the cold winter. Lol, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Anna Mae on September 21, 2004
    Ahh! At last someone who cones tes to owning Canada.

    But seriously your doing a good job with Snape (I hate it when people make him all warm and fuzzy just out of blue) and no I don't think Hermione is too over the top considering what's happening to her.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 21, 2004
    I would be happy with the sixth chapter too--If it were longer! LOL! Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 21, 2004
    I think you did well with Snape, but it seems to me that the Dark Lord here in this story is, uh, almost nice. Where are the curses? Where is the pain that he puts his own people through? Where is the terror from his followers? Annoyance is all well in good, but not in a bunch of followers that are supposed to be terrified of dying any minute.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2004
    I don't think that Dumbledore comes off too mean. If you're asserting that he was in support of the law, then circumstances within the Wizarding world must have been dire. People will do things that seem OOC when the situation is bad enough. Being the Chief Warlock of the Wizengamot (or whatever that darned title is) he has a responsibility to do what's best for society, which means he may have to gloss over his private feelings for the greater good. Sucks to be a ic sic servant sometimes. So, long explanation short (too late!) your characterization of Dumbledore is completely defensible IMO. Thanks for writing and I look forward to reading more of this.
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  • From BrianChattillon on September 18, 2004
    Chapter 5
    Read up to here , My my seems Hermie has a mouth on herr as well as a tounge Ne?
    Should prove rather interesting when it's turned to Sevrus's favour Ne?
    (Yes I AM a horny dirty YOUNG man Mwahahahaha)
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  • From ANON - Ale Map on September 18, 2004
    Sorry to nit-pick but I think that Limone Ballate in the singular or Limoni Ballate for the plural would be more accurate because Ballare does mean to dance but it is not proper for the grammer formation that you want and Limonate is a word that doesn't exist. I'm only a second level grammer speciallist so I might be wrong. Other than that your story has a good beginning and I like the direction you're taking with the character development. I can't wait until you establish them a bit more as the story progresses.

    Ta,
    Map
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