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Reviews for You Can Call Me Severus

By : famlia
  • From Loussi on July 06, 2007
    Just great, I think Severus is very IC in this fic, because i can't really imagien all his animosity for Potter going away just because they got married. Great work. *hugs*
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  • From mariacella on February 26, 2007
    This story is both interesting and disturbing. The mood is wonderful, though sometimes your sentence structure can be a bit confusing. I know this is just my opinion, but I feel it's important to point out that Harry's feelings toward Severus seem to be more Stockholm syndrome than real love, and if these weren't fictional characters I would be worried.
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  • From ANON - RD Wind on January 27, 2006
    Well, I liked it... You could continue that one and make a full length out of it if you wanted. Lots of story potential!


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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 27, 2006
    This is both one of the more interesting and most horrifying fics I have read. The rough quality of both the language Harry uses and the resignation/acceptance he displays actually manage to seem suitable to the canon character in many regards, if he had been sold off young and isolated. People often forget that Rowling describes an abusive upbringing in other ways besides physical and emotional. Harry's acceptance of the restrictions on his freedom were particularly poignant as I can see that in Harry's love of flying but also in his acceptance of living in a cupboard and being isolated from the surrounding community in his formative years. Severus' failure to "productively relate to societal mores" is also characteristic and consistent with an ex-Death Eater buried in guilt that he refuses to acknowledge.
    Overall, this was a horribly depressing story that still portrayed strength of character in many ways.
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  • From ANON - StrangeLove on December 31, 2005
    Different but nice, in a strange way - just the way I like it tho...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2005
    Creepy. Plausible. Sad. Beautifully Written.
    But I hope this never happens to anyone.
    (though... I'm sure somewhere out there it does, and I hope those persons have the strength to leave or fight back).
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  • From ANON - Silentwater13 on October 26, 2005
    Wow...this is brillant! you're a really good author but you might want to check your grammer.
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  • From ANON - barbarataku on October 24, 2005
    What a b******. Excellent job of making me mad.
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  • From ANON - Katie K on October 16, 2005
    Hmm I think I've read this story before... not sure if I reviewed last time I read it, so here goes: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! *happy hyperness* awwwww
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  • From ANON - this is an original name on October 14, 2005
    That was loverly! I loved it! It reminds me of my dad and step-mom and me! Yay!

    No... not really 'Yay!' but I still liked it!!!

    YAY! Beautifully written, some puncuation stuff wrong, but we're not perfect! I loved this story a lot.
    *heartgasm*
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 23, 2005
    Well, this was certainly different than most of what I've read here. I saw the reasoning and rationale as a desperate attempt to make what Severus was doing as acceptable. Yes, it said that Harry wasn't hurt, not physically but emotionally and verbally. Fear is not supposed to be in a loving relationship.

    Now that I've got that off my chest, this was great! For a short story, the details of the arrangement they had, the methods of compliance and dominance were clearly laid out. The bold attitude of Harry finally got recognized, but I wondered why if Severus liked it, why he didn't ask for it before????

    Shahinazi was a perfect little doll. With the 'relaxed' attitude now prevalent, the next child would not be so groomed.

    So what's so boring or bad working in a slimy, dark dungeon making potions???? Huh?? Huh?? I'm sure it was Severus' way to just watch Harry, as he was so enamoured with just looking at him. The same goes for Harry sitting on his lap for breakfast. Yeah, it's also a domineering thing too, but, I'll err on the side of romance.

    Great story, again, thank you.
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  • From lysa1 on May 20, 2005
    A reformed wife-beater? A reformed Death Eater..
    Well, I suppose it is possible.
    The story was as a matter of fact believeable, and made the rather serious subject interesting and rather realistic in the non-realistic context.
    I liked it a lot. Not the usual HP/SS-slash-Snape-is-evil-Harry-falls-in-love-shite...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    I really liked this story. I'd actually read it months ago and I couldn't remember the name of it. I had a devil of a time finding it again. But now that I have, it's going in my favorites.


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  • From ANON - sethian on April 15, 2005
    I love your story in a strange kind of way. It makes me sad, and angry because I love the character Harry so much, in every fanfic I read Harry's personality is always so sweet...that's why it makes me so sad to 'see' him hurt in a so weird way. I like the psychologic side of your story...I don't know any woman/girl who were beaten/injured by their husband but I think this description you made of Harry's mind must be close to what they feel/think.
    Sethian
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  • From ANON - Annas on September 23, 2004
    This was realy good

    Annas
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