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Reviews for Her 16th Birthday

By : jaber03
  • From luvhp on August 15, 2007
    OOh, I loved it so much. The fact that she had a row with Ron while she was drunk was all the better for Draco. I love all things Draco/Hermione so I absolutely loved it!!! I especially like dthe fact that she actually stayed with him all day in bed. :)
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - ck on February 07, 2006
    a few misspellings here and there, but pretty good.
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  • From ANON - sestra on April 26, 2005
    omy
    that was beyond wonderful
    ii read your other stories and loved them too
    write more, send me one if you are so daring
    love your work
    your choice of words paint lovely, vivid pictures in my virgin mind
    keep writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2005
    You're a natural. Good description of what rear entry sex is actually like. The only thing you left out were the tears immediately coming to your eyes at the most unbelievable pain you've ever felt.
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  • From ANON - Jorge on January 10, 2005
    I really enjoyed this and hope that you update another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - G.A.G(Good As Gold) on December 20, 2004
    Got damn that was good
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  • From ANON - shtoyshted on December 04, 2004
    man that was really good i hope u continue with it
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  • From ANON - sheepy82 on November 09, 2004
    excellent though more is required with more evil keep writing you have a nack
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  • From on November 01, 2004
    Ok that was fucked up but it was good. It was probably better then mine. I just post my first one. Itsl Chl Choices. It was purly fucked up but i like yous. It has that feel 2 16 year olds making... um... well it was good.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 19, 0000
    Nice start...update soon
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  • From jaber03 on October 17, 2004
    I thought this story was pretty good.
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  • From ANON - LosaLou on October 16, 2004
    While this story could have had it's good points, I just couldn't find the strength within to actually finish it. Hermione is smarter than that, and she's bossy as hell, some people can pull off the 'oh so innocent' Hermione stuff, you can't. Your sentences are too short, and choppy. You take three different ideas and run with the dullest of them all. I'm not one to rewrite a writer, but that just plain sucked, hope you do better next time, but this one isn't making the cut for me.

    Losa Lou
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  • From ANON - Malefic on October 16, 2004
    This fic needs beta-ing but I surprisingly enjoyed it a lot! Draco and Hermione getting down and dirty is always a good thing!*impish grin* Please update soon.

    PS: Is this fic inspired by Draco's Bitch?
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