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Reviews for Fortress

By : juniper
  • From ANON - RowanRhys on May 23, 2003
    I really enjoyed this story. I liked how you got the emotions coming through and while it's obvious that they love each other, you also show how their respective experiences and backgrounds affect thy thy they are at this time in their lives. Severus' need for solitude after intimacy was so very telling, and Hermione's reactions to menopause rang true. I saw one or two minor typos (dropped letters at the end of a word) but the technical aspects of the writing and presentation were really well done. Thanks for this new snapshot of the SS/HG relationship.
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  • From ANON - damademuerta on May 21, 2003
    oh that was such a nice story.I wish I could write a better review, but I couldn't write my way out of a paper bag.!
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  • From ANON - kayla on May 21, 2003
    excellent story! really liked it, youre writing technique is great. keep writing! youre very good!
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  • From ANON - genrou on May 16, 2003
    ah..that was an incredibly nice story. and an amusing epilougue as well. it had a great flow and mood-you know that fuzzy blanket type in midst of rain outside. and it was nice to see how she did not escape fate. i dont know really what to say except for that blanket description, but thanks. i look foward toseeing more of your work in the future.
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  • From ANON - Deborah on May 13, 2003
    That was a beautiful story. By the end, tears were in my eyes.
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on May 13, 2003
    Wonderful story, excellently written. Your portrayal of the relationship between Snape and Hermione was intense and beautiful. It was nice to see them as a couple in their later years it made the lovemaking scenes all the more special. Thanks for a great read, I hope you write something else soon.
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  • From ANON - b on May 13, 2003
    I really liked this story. Why you haven't got more reviews I cannot guess... Well, I can but that would be slander.
    I found it very well written, i.e- the love making scene was excellent, it had just the right pacing and was tastefully accomplished and developed a real sense of time and place for the characters, so many ppl just assume Hermione stays 18 for the rest of her life. Great stuff! Fleab
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