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Reviews for The Premonition

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  • From Annecia89 on July 19, 2015
    All I could say was "damn"....
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  • From wudelfin on November 05, 2007
    damn that just bite, just when you thought it would have a happy ending. *snif!*
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  • From ANON - Christina on October 29, 2006
    OMG!!!! THAT WAS SUCH CRAP!! wait that didn't come out right.... the story was fantastic! But the ending was just SOOOO sad!! poor Hermione and Draco and their poor babies!!
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  • From ANON - rach on February 06, 2006
    made me cry. a truly wonderfully touching story.

    bittersweet.
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  • From ANON - mstrsofmayhm on November 17, 2005
    *sob* That's so sad how in the end it's their children that die T___T
    Do you have any idea how sad that made me? Not to mention the tears in my eyes?
    It was extremely well written and story line was genius.
    GENIUS I SAY!
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  • From elibdally on October 09, 2005
    Oh my GOD!!! This is the BEST one shot fic I have EVER read. I soooooo did NOT see THAT ending coming. WOW!!! Poor Hermione and Draco, it wasn't enough that they tried to do everything in their power to hurt each other before this whole love potion, but now in about, what....18 years from now their TWINS will kill each other. WOW!!! I guess that the distruction of Hogwarts is inevitable. Two thumbs up and a thank you for having such a brillian mind and coming up with something so read worthy.

    With much respect to this fic,

    LaLa is out...
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  • From ANON - tig on October 03, 2005
    hi! this is really a fantastic story. the ending is just so... ... gosh! i dunno what to say.. it is just so surprising and yet so logical.. a really GREAT twist in the end!! enjoyed it A LOT!! ^^
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  • From ANON - alia on July 02, 2005
    gewd lord.
    its amazing
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 16, 2005
    Sorry, I scanned the other reviews, and I just wanted to stick my nose into the twin gestation comments. My twins were born at 29 weeks (yes, very frightening), my mother's twins at 38 weeks, and my grandmother's twins at 36 weeks. Of course, when Gran had my mother and aunt, they didn't know she was having twins until delivery, just like the story (which is how my aunt ended up with Veronica as a middle name). What I am trying to say, is that NO ONE can predict when any birth will take place. Single, or higher order multiple.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 16, 2005
    Nice ending. Sweet, not always.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 29, 2005
    good story!! I loved the ending
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  • From ANON - C.C. on February 16, 2005
    Hey Elwyn,

    I love this fic! Clever story line and the ending was unexpected. I'm glad you've introduced us to your work in the community. Hope you'll write more.

    C.C.
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  • From ANON - genrou on February 16, 2005
    i had a feeling of twins and them being in the vision. though it would be nice to see the sequel-and who knows maybe they wont destroy it because of...whatever-the two love spells, the patricide, or what not.
    though, i do believe twins are usually born at 8months, tripliets arent but twins are always early.
    but, really, id like to see what happens.
    good story. thanks. and its a good thing you recomended your self.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2005
    i really really like it.i think it just might be my favorite story so far.i love the twist at the end.you should totally right a sequal!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2004
    that was brilliant!
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