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Reviews for Draco 1/2 - Completed

By : hermy
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 08, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - jonny j on August 03, 2006
    flaming bag of poo
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  • From ANON - hermy on February 02, 2005
    Carolyn, thanks for your honest view and interest. :)

    I wrote prologue at the end, because it hints at being a beginning anyhow. Is not life a cycle, and does anything really end? If it gets a bit too confusing for more readers, I'll probably change it to epilogue later on. I'll be sure to credit that one to you, too. LOL

    I'm just happy my story is readable and enjoyable. :)
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  • From ANON - carolyn on January 31, 2005
    Haha, ooh, coool. The last sentence explained it all. I was about to say- "Prologue? Erm.. You must mean the epilogue surely?"

    The fic wasn't bad, it was short and sweet. Not short like a one-shot.. but short and sweet for novel-length fics. =) There were some grammatical/sentence structure kinks here and there, but nothing a beta or long-time writing experience won't fix. And to be honest, I was pretty relieved when Draco got turned back into his male form. Nothing like good ole' D/Hr smut.

    Thanks for posting the story! GL in future endeavors.
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  • From ANON - dragonsgirl on January 31, 2005
    I loved this story. I liked the part when hermione turned herself into a tiger.
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  • From hermy on January 31, 2005
    Thank you for your reviews, Carolyn and Hanna Delacour: I have done posting the rest of the chapters. Enjoy!

    I wish I could have explored more of the relationship between Ron and Hermione through the picnic, before going on to Draco... but I was afraid the story would be a bit more long-winded than necessary. I hope the prologue has taken care of this need, though. Let me know if there are things I might need to improve on. I had a different story under a different username here, and the title was Teaching Draco Malfoy-- but I lost motivation to finish that chapter by chapter. SO, that taught me to finish a story BEFORE posting it online. Otherwise I would have starved fanfic readers roosting my hide over fire! I know that feeling, too. lmao

    With gratitude,
    Hermy (the author of this story you're reading these reviews for)
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 31, 2005
    Great fic! Chapter six was hysterical. I can't wait for the rest of this story. Update soon, I will be reading!
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  • From ANON - carolyn on January 30, 2005
    Wow... A year. Holy crockers. So maybe it isn't so much like Ranma. Unless you know.. someone accidentally pours hot water (or was it cold? It's been a long time since I've watched it.) on Draco and finds out that water has suddenly magical qualities!! Ooh lala.
    The story is written well so far, please continue!
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