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By : lightgoddess
  • From ANON - Aisling on November 06, 2005
    oooh nice chapter-- Luna rocks! more soonc ya xx
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  • From ANON - amanda on November 06, 2005
    update soon great story
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  • From ANON - Draven on October 25, 2005
    Awesome story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on October 15, 2005
    it's so cute! so very "big furry puffball of a puppy" cute, if that makes any sense. write more please!
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  • From ANON - TyRisha on October 15, 2005
    ooooo. i love it. hmm, harry as a father. he could do it fairly well but it's all in the eye of the beholder (or author in this case) i suppose. please continue asap.
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  • From ANON - shadowraven113 on October 14, 2005
    i love your story please update soon
    your story line is great one of a kind
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  • From ANON - raija on October 13, 2005
    Oh you evil author, you. You got me hooked and then THEN leave me hanging like this. Shame on you. ;) Brilliant!
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  • From ANON - zak & ivan ONE LAST TIME for today! on October 06, 2005
    LAST review today I promise hehe...

    yay it did sorry about that due to our shitty internet I always copy it...

    That's my smart Ivan...

    Now we have like 5 mins Zak

    I'll tell them I'm running late

    okay, whatever.

    zak&ivan
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  • From ANON - Zak and Ivan once again >.> haha on October 06, 2005
    Hey.... it's being stupid... you can't make a heart *pout* okay so here's the WHOLE review without a heart... (Will it work is the question)

    *suddenly realizes that Zak and Ivan have a cult following*

    hahahahahaha!

    Zak as always is perched in my lap the little faggot.

    Hey I don't like that word and if I am so are you!

    Yes, but I know I'm one.

    Shut up.

    I am victorious!

    Shut it! Or I'll castrate you with a spork!

    >.> a spork? I would hope not because then you'd be without sex for the rest of our married days, since you are so the bottom... and you told me you'd prefer it! Hah!

    Be quiet will you I'm trying to tell her something...

    whatever...

    Okay, so we have a cult?! hahaha! that's some funny shit... I'd never thought I'd be popular.

    Great he's letting this get to his head, he doesn't need a bigger ego... and Zak you already are VERY popular amongst out friends, I bet if we had a fight all our friends would side with you, especially Trey because he wants to bang you...

    My husband needs to shut up... and I don't have a big ego! I just have no self hate! I HEART myself

    Yes... especially that left hand of yours.

    Mhmm!

    I married a horny bastard...

    And you like it!

    It's been a while since we've talked... err... reviewed madam author. I'm sure Zak told you all about his birthday, he's old now. I'm also sure that he's been getting quite a work out from his wanking.

    Hey if you're not here someone has to do it... would you like Trey to come over? I bet he'd be happy to.

    Zak, we are not going to discus Trey and his fantasies on here.

    Okay back to the topic at hand... oh wait! We don't have livejournals... if we did it'd be ours... like one for the two of us, maybe we should start one! If we do I'll tell you so that you can tell your fans *primps*

    ... Zak actually stuck his chest out and flexed his non-existent biceps... what a looooooser! Everyone point at him and laugh!

    *pouts*

    Awww he actually did that too, I love my Zakkypoo

    Zakkypoo? WTF? hahahahhaha! You are crazy Ivanypoo... doesn't work with your name...

    Maybe we should start a Livejournal, love.

    hmmm... I'm the one with the most time, maybe we will and yeah... maybe I will! haha! Now I will have to figure out how to do that lovely stuff... on there... and blah! okay... when I get time I will. Right now I can't... during winter maybe, after fall... after my fall sport is finished...

    What fall sport?

    Shut up Ivan.

    Sport?

    ...

    Is Marching Band considered a sport?

    Ivan! Be quiet... so what I play the trumpet... I'm not pouting

    yes you are

    no I'm not... this is a really long review my lover.

    So? It's been a while. Plus have to give something for our fans to read xD

    haha, fans... Ivan dye your hair back to a weird color. How about something weird... like...

    We've tried all colors, for the gay party we had you even did rainbows on our heads... (He literally tied me down with our fuzzy handcuffs and dyed my hair.)

    And you liked it

    You're the kinky one Zak...

    You like it too

    I'm not saying that I don't just saying that YOU like it alot more.

    You know what Ivan I'm going into our bedroom and celebrating your arrival home, you can stay out here if you want to... but I'm telling you I CAN very well celebrate on my own, I'd rather you join in since my left hand is a little sore. I think I pulled a tendon or something.

    THAT RIGHT there is a sign that you have been jacking off WAY too much my friend.

    Well then help me... stop jacking off so much... You know Ivan I can't control the thoughts about you that I get into my head, I can't control how hot you are and my urges... oh god look at me! FIX IT! Meet me in the bed room

    Don't you have to work in like 15mins?

    YES! We have to be fast, I'll just tell my boss we were fucking it'll be alright.

    No you won't. Now come on sign your name and get out of those pajama pants.

    ~Zakkypoo
    -Ivanypoo

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  • From ANON - Zak and Ivan on October 06, 2005
    Continued (haha)

    My husband needs to shut up... and I don't have a big ego! I just have no self hate! I
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  • From ANON - zak and ivan on October 06, 2005
    *suddenly realizes that Zak and Ivan have a cult following*

    hahahahahaha!

    Zak as always is perched in my lap the little faggot.

    Hey I don't like that word and if I am so are you!

    Yes, but I know I'm one.

    Shut up.

    I am victorious!

    Shut it! Or I'll castrate you with a spork!

    >.> a spork? I would hope not because then you'd be without sex for the rest of our married days, since you are so the bottom... and you told me you'd prefer it! Hah!

    Be quiet will you I'm trying to tell her something...

    whatever...

    Okay, so we have a cult?! hahaha! that's some funny shit... I'd never thought I'd be popular.

    Great he's letting this get to his head, he doesn't need a bigger ego... and Zak you already are VERY popular amongst out friends, I bet if we had a fight all our friends would side with you, especially Trey because he wants to bang you...

    My husband needs to shut up... and I don't have a big ego! I just have no self hate! I
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  • From ANON - antipyro on October 03, 2005
    Yes, you surprised me, a bit.....I think......

    Is Luna still with her Dad's Magazine, the Quibbler or is she now in charge of it and is now writing better articles?

    Good trick on Lavendar - she deserved soooo much more.

    Love it and want more, soon.
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  • From ANON - Jadzia on September 22, 2005
    Have I mentioned how very much I like this story? It's marvelous :)
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  • From ANON - Angie/Les` on September 18, 2005
    Uh oh that isn't very good. Tehee
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  • From ANON - Shaddow on September 15, 2005

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