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Reviews for Flawed Chemistry

By : Prentice
  • From Agora on April 24, 2005
    I am not wondering about Prentice's maturity, I am wondering about Anon. The fact that she continues to come back to Flawed Chemistry, a story which she claims to dislike, and leave flames. How sad and pathetic is that? If you don't like a story, do as most everyone else does...don't read it. If you leave a crap review, don't come back to defend your title repeatly. You are just making other see you as a pathetic, immature reader.

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  • From ANON - mada on April 24, 2005
    You certainly did not deserve that review. I hope you continue with your story since I REALLY like it. Don't let stupid people get you down.
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  • From ANON - Eve on April 24, 2005
    You write very well, Love the concept as well. Ignore the flamers, including the ones who hide behind seemingly innocent words!. (Including the ones who write such negative reviews. It doesn't seem at all as if they are trying to help you, more like stroking their own netego.) The story is wonderful, it's not too short at all. Anon, simply because an author writes "short" or "small" chapters doesn't make them less experienced than the rest. In a way you are calling her a liar, tsk tsk.
    Reviews aren't to be used to insult, insinuate falsehood, degrade the author, it is a way to express ones opinion about the story.
    But I guess Anon is just a bastard :D.



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  • From ANON - Eve on April 24, 2005
    Love the story :D keep up the great work!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2005
    The two different reviews from "anon" were not, in actuality, from the same reviewer. Two different anons, two different reviews. If you've been writing for over ten years, why is each chapter so extremely short and mostly incoherent? I did think I'd like it to begin with, I do think the basic concept is good. and I would like to read it if you edited it. There are often people who get on here and other sites to post nonsensical stories as some kind of a joke, sort of trolling about, and when a story is posted that jumps around and doesn't make sense, in addition to having such short chapters, it's hard to differentiate between someone who is serious about writing a story and someone who is just yanking everyone's chain. What I find ironic is when writers who claim to be accomplished and experience authors write utter tripe get defensive at an honest opinion and then throw out "A/N" that flame the reviewer far worse than the reivew itself. And of course, deleting the offending reviews because you want your review box to only reflect those that are completely positive because, God forbid, you might have to take the bad with the good and then live with it. Grow up. It doesn't matter how old you are, get over yourself and you indignation that you will occasionally get a bad review. And as if you couldn't figure it out, I did want to read it until I finally got frustrated with it and the review was a pretty good indication that I have no intention to read anymore without a majore overhaul. Find a beta who can help you. Again, the basic concept is good.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on April 24, 2005
    Wow. Sounds like you are getting flamed. Try not to let that get to you, I personally would like to know how Hermione is getting along and what the heck she brewed! ;) I'm specifically encouraging you to continue. Hope people start using tact with you soon. *sigh*
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on April 24, 2005
    I'd like to say that, while I agree that you can deal with your reviews as you like, I can't fully agree with your stand on posting/archiving your stories. If you post a fanfic, you are making an invitation to the reader. If you feel that you are only writing them for your pleasure, then don't post them on a public archive. It's bad enough when a story fizzles out and never gets completed, without authors pulling stories because they don't like what a few people say. Having said that, I think it would be a shame for you to yank your story, as I'm intrigued as to where it's going.
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  • From ANON - forge underhilL on April 24, 2005
    To Prentice!
    I really enjoyed your story so far and I desperately hope that you will NOT pull out of this group/organisation/joining? I'm not quite sure what to call it! sorry. I am not sure when exactly the harrasement happened, for I have only recently discovered your story and the style was amazing!!! Please, please, PLEASE continue. I shall be waiting patiently
    late days
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 23, 2005
    You go girl! I personally have enjoyed your story and I hope you write more. I was saddened to see you new chapter was a note, but I know that happens. Please don't think all readers share those views. Please keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - kara on April 23, 2005
    Do you remove all posts that question you? Interesting since none of them were flamers. Criticism can help at times and you should learn to take it.
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  • From Rapunzel007 on April 23, 2005
    I must say, a rather interesting plot. Very well written, too. Please, do continue.

    - Blotted Ink
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  • From ANON - June on April 23, 2005
    Ch 6-7 - hmm, I sure hope there's a good healing or pain-relieving potion for Severus. That sounds awful, barely moving around on that leg of his; perhaps a good long soak in a hot tub might help. Please have a nice ending for him and Hermione! Thank you for updating!!
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  • From ANON - divine angel on March 22, 2005
    Ooooh. Very good. What is the potion??!!!! Please continue with this story.
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  • From ANON - June on March 04, 2005
    Ch 5 - a real killer chapter. You did a great job in painting a picture of Severus' post-war life. How awful, to sacrifice so much for the Light and then be wounded and suffering beyond the help of potions. They can't just remove his leg and use Skele-Gro (like Harry Potter's hand in Book 2)? I hope Hermione is able to help him. Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - NobisSolomNon on March 02, 2005
    No! Unfair! Hurry and update!
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