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Reviews for A Secret Fantasy

By : IShantsay
  • From ANON - Pina Colada on September 08, 2014
    I stumbled upon this fic a looooong time ago. Last week I remembered this little fic out of the blue... Don't know why. I'm so glad I found it again after such a long time. Still love it! Normally I'm not a big fan of watersports, but this fic is so sensitively written, that I totally fell in love with it all over again. Kudos!
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  • From on April 18, 2009
    A friend of mine recced this due to my whining about how there is no SS/HG watersport fics. I was pleasantly surprised, and enjoyed reading this very much. My only small concrit would be that the characters use each others names too much in their dialogue---but otherwise I really enjoyed their back and forth banter. Especially Hermione's twenty questions XD

    Cheers!
    snogged
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From KarenLioncourt on February 02, 2007
    I was amused and suprised by myself when I discovered I enjoyed this fic. And I can totally see how this could be arousing. It was a very interesting and eye opening experience. After this I dont think anything can suprise me anymore. ^^
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  • From ANON - Robin on August 12, 2006
    And I am not into watersports - just to make it clear ;)
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  • From ANON - Robin on August 12, 2006
    OK here I am writing a review and giving you my name and e-mail address.
    Why do you feel embarrassed and won't tell your name?
    I call you a coward. That's harsh, I know.
    It's a damn good story - one of a kind - and I am impressed by your will to actually think about the things you read/hear. Not everyone who might have written such a story would have made Hermione so understanding. I am not into analsex at all but the fact that you wrote it the way you did had me enjoying it.

    So next time you think about things you're not sure someone would like to read put up a warning (like you did) and give the reader time to stop (like you did) and do give your name (cause I have authors where I say, ok I like their style of writing, their way with words ...). It will help your readers to decide whether to read it because they like you and know your other stories (though they might be completely different)
    Anyway keep on writing whoever you may be
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2005
    PIHB? Please tell me you are a Fazer! >:) I loved the story!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 17, 2005
    Okay let me go ahead and review on THIS one.

    First, I almost laughed myself silly when I read it.

    Second, I wouldn't be embarrassed, because I've learned, if it SOUNDS too kinky then I GUARANTEE you a couple has done it.
    So I would not be shocked if a couple actually did this act.
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  • From ANON - Amaryllis on April 08, 2005
    I think that you did a very good job in what you set out to do (as per your a/n). It is an interesting story, with character, and treats a fetish with understanding and dignity. I thought it a good read.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - wytchkat on April 08, 2005
    very nice and very tastefully done.
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  • From ANON - PlaidPooka on April 07, 2005
    I think you are being a bit to hard on yourself. Firstly because--while I find the subject a bit odd--as a fetish, I really don't find it all that squicky. As you showed in the story, there is nothing about the act that is unsanitary and the way it was handled in the shower, etc, it wasn't even messy. In a fanfic world, where there are a plethora of sexual tales which involve rape, torture, and blood sports, a little water sport seems terribly tame. It hurts no one. The second, and I think more important thing I'd like to say is that I enjoyed very much the way you handled the whole subject of two people, in a loving relationship, being both interested and non-judgmental about each other's fantasies. No one has to do an act that they are truly uncomfortable with, but to act like Ron did and make a loved one feel they cannot even be honest about their desires is unpardonable. You showed the difference between Hermione's honest consideration of the idea and Ron's making his partner feel like they were disgusting, and you illustrated the point elegantly and well. You should not be ashamed to put your name to this fic; you did a great job with a difficult subject.
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  • From ANON - Apythia on April 07, 2005
    This story was discussed on a yahoo group and it piqued my curiosity as to what all the hush-hush was about. But I must say, you wrote a truthful account of how one might end up doing some fetish they have never thought about. I have never heard of such a thing before, but it is a credit to your writing ability that not only did it almost seem like something that might occur in any bedroom, but you have people talking about your writing, which is something we all want as writers. So kudos for being brave!
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  • From ANON - jaegan on April 07, 2005
    While, like the author, it's not something I would probably try, I found this to be a well written and intriguing story. Just because it's not my particular kink doesn't mean there's anything wrong with it. And it was definitely not the average run-of-the-mill been-done-to-death-twice SS/HG story. That alone gives it a certain merit. Kudos to the author, whoever they may be.
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