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Reviews for The Boy Without a Soul

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From Archerychick on July 11, 2008
    I've never threatened an author before, brcause I hate it when i am threatened, but i am begining to see the appeal. Please keep writting. These are very good and entertaining. It would ber a shame for you not to finish this...or any of your others for that matter
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 09, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From Claushiru on April 03, 2008
    Well well, for a boy with no soul, he sure can throw a tantrum O_O
    Nice story so far! :) I can't wait to see Neville step in and be a man lol ^^
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on April 02, 2008
    A very intresting story, Harry's charcter is a little strange but enjoyable to read. I cant wait for the next installment
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  • From X5927alpha on April 02, 2008
    I really like this story, but I think you could use a beta to make sure misspelling and grammer problems don't happen.

    If you haven't got one, and you'd like one, I would offer my help. Send me an email if so.

    mercurygoddess4_2000@yahoo.com
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  • From anniea on February 21, 2008
    oh you have me caught in your web of fantastic stories. please update soon *kisses*
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  • From Toddy on January 11, 2008
    This is getting good. Hermione and Ron as opponents to Harry, what an interesting idea. Please continue this is very fascinating
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 10, 2008
    Poor Harry! Sooo need chapter 6! Will the little Gryffindor that was spying report what he saw?
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  • From bananasforyou on December 23, 2007
    i loved it.poor harry and draco!
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  • From dorothyloh on December 23, 2007
    draco is just so sweet... and ron and hermione can go die for all i care better yet dun die but bed ridden..

    good work, can't wait for next chapter.
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  • From ANON - damned angel on August 22, 2006
    Neat story. Needs some grammer help but I'm willing to put up with the mistakes as I just love the plot. :D
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  • From ANON - Lula Paluza on August 20, 2006
    Wow!!! That was great! I
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  • From ANON - drippy123 on August 19, 2006
    First, for someone whose first language isn't English, you're doing a half-way decent job. Second, some of the sentences don't make sense; they are confusing due to the misuse of words and other problems. Unfortunately, you are missing words and things like -ed and -ing at the end of words needing them; you are also missing necessary punctuation like commas (,), semi-colons (;), etc.

    I recommend you find a good English dictionary, a good thesaurus, and a grammar and punctuation guide. I also recommend a visit to the hp-lexicon.org site so that you can keep canon facts and spellings straight.
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  • From dragonsmaidan on August 19, 2006
    I can;t wait for the next chapter of this story to come out it's so good. I really hope that Draco is able to help Harry and help him regain his soul.

    ~Gracy
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  • From ANON - Vibora on August 17, 2006
    wow! this is pretty good ^_^ update soon!
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