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Reviews for The Death of a Soul

By : Roedhunt
  • From lizkrohn on February 04, 2019

    Will Snape dissovle the bond? He is too selfish to do anything like that:

    1 self-preservation - they might send him to Azkhaban after the bind is broken

    2 he likes owning Harry

    3 He actually likes haveing harry at is mercy, the son of his childhood nemesis

    Harry shouldn't be is any relationship, with ginny, Draco or another until he has sorted out his feelings about himself and live on his own without being controlled. firstly he was controlled by the Dursleys, then Dumbledore, then the order, Ron and Hermione maybe his friends but they also were a tool to control where he went, what he did, who he was friends with etc. Ginny was also "the pureblood, light, acceptable girlfriend"! Whenever did he actually make is own choices and decisions? Not mentally healthy at all!


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  • From Beyrus on December 07, 2017

    Hi!!

    I'm Beyrus, a slash writer and I love your fic, that's why I'm writing to you. **Sorry but I didn't found any best way to contact you**. 

    I'm a Spanish girl and I know a lot of people that will enjoy with this fanfic, but as they don't speak English, they can't. That's why I would like you to give me your permission.

    I upload my fanfics at www.slasheaven.com and I was wondering if you would let me translate into Spanish your fic "Death of a soul" and upload it there too. 

    Slasheaven is a popular website where a lot of spanish-speaking people share their fanfics. You can check my fanfics there, my nickname is Beyrus.

    BTW, are you going to write the Epilogue? It'd be a very good thing *^_^*

    Thanks for your attention and hope to hear from you soon.

    My e-mail is marea_1982@hotmail.com

    Bye, bye,
    Beyrus.


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  • From jami_lee on November 19, 2013
    WOW!!!! I just found this I love it!!! But if I was Harry I wouldn't be able to choose.
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  • From ANON - Cat on July 06, 2011
    Where the HELL is the epilogue! I want to know what he decided!
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  • From Natalucien on March 24, 2011
    I like the story. There is only one major problem. YOu left us hanging what the hell happend next. Pleas. Finish. The. Story!!!! Please?
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  • From ANON - leanne on September 11, 2010
    okay the thing I like about this story is how you portrayed a fairly good emotional break down and the insanity of both the unstableness of Snape and how unstable Harry had become in it. I had hoped this story wouldn't have been quite so dark. I had hoped that Severus and Harry would have had a good and caring relationship in the story at some point. What I don't understand is why this story was placed in the Severus/Harry as in a relationship section. I think it should have been placed in the General section and placed in "dark" story. This story was addicting and horrifying all at once.

    Severus is already a tragic person due to his own abusive father in own pain over loosing Lily Evans, and if in your story he had been trained in "love" making he had been raped terribly while learning this art for Voldimort.

    So all in all this story is Tragic and painful. You did a good job in demestrating the damage of rape on the sphycie.

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  • From ANON - IshtarTenshi on January 27, 2010
    OMG! You're back! *hugglez* I'm so happy you put out a new chapter. Hurry, I want a new one! I have cookies...*swings cookies in your face*
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  • From HeartStar on January 26, 2010
    There is a part two where !
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  • From HeartStar on January 26, 2010
    Oh it s been so long I love this story I read it all again please when you get the chance update when you can I so want to see what happens thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From mrequecky on January 22, 2010
    Oh wow, I had tears running down in rivers... Loved!
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  • From ANON - Monique on January 22, 2010
    Absolutely love this story! Amazing writing! Soo want them to all be together in a litle love triangle lol. Just wondering if part 2 is out (because i couldnt find it) or if it hasnt been startedx yet?
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  • From ArthazonFangbrow on January 21, 2010
    ROAR!!! WANT EPILOGUE NOW!!!! God the emotion in this story is so bloody palpable!!
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  • From keraizaki on December 09, 2009
    Awsomse story! :3
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  • From 12blue12 on December 04, 2009
    holy cow lol... anyway one critisizm... there are times during this story that the passage of time is kinda weird. like you will say something that makes its sound like weekd.. at least quite a few days like the time you wrote about harry spiralling into the no feeling time but then the next chapter you find out it has been only two days. Oh yeah and also if your going to go back in yime from a diffirent pov i think you should think about not changing the pov in the previous chapter before it was reitterated from liek harry to snape... i think maybe you need to organize your timelines a little better so teh stiry flows easier. i get the necessity of seeing both sides but things get a little confusing when you make so much time pass and so much poc changes and go right back into time to show a different pov. i think all you need is practice,, i noticed you have been getting slightly better at that through the chapter. Oh and another thing omg great story line very very interesting .. ive been reading most of the in between wastching dolllhouse and cleanign XD (if you watch the show... omg to the ending eh?) the fact snape is actually kinda nuts is intriguing though understandable from your percpective how fucked he has to be from what he went through though i do want to punch him in the face.. like seriosuly... but the whole love bussiness.. wonder how long he's gonna last before he cracks and remember that oh right he doesnt love harry potter cuz duh he doesnt know him and never wante dto knwo him just to "win" him over urg and barf sometimes from reading taht by the way. like i feel sorry for a fictional charter having to give therapy to snape... *Shakes head* normally huge fan of snape but your snape ... creeeepy.... and and the whole draco, harry, ginny bussiness.... could kind let it end up being a drarry in the end .. pweetty pweeeeeeze. sorry neverr liek ginny and harry together much ... she kind acreeps me out actually... me that into a guys her whole life *Shrugs* but that just me. but yeah cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on December 03, 2009
    That was so emotional and exciting. I am glad to see an update on this. Hope to see more soon.
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