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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - EEvans on December 29, 2013
    Two hours and twenty seven minutes past my bedtime. Read the whole of what's posted. Fell under your spell. Cannot quite form normal sentences and do not want to wait long for the next chapter. Dear Rain, please tell us you have this story completed and are merely teasing us with snippets at time?? Also...how *delicious* would it be if the whole thing backfires on dear Draco and he ends up following his plan for real? :) *plotting smile
    More soon please. Hope you are well. Happy New Year!
    Elisa
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  • From ANON - Audrea on December 28, 2013
    Love it!!! Please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - Ash on December 19, 2013
    I've been binging on Draco/Hermione fics all week, and this is definitely one of my favorites. I didn't even notice when I got to chapter 10 that there wasn't more (yet, I hope).

    It's well written, it keeps a beautiful pace. There really aren't any dull moments. It's very sweet, honestly, and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - atlantean_diva on December 16, 2013
    I truly loathe the idea of you making Padma out to be some type of whore. This role should go to Lavender or Parvati. Sure, she and Ron attended the Yule Ball together, but according to this story that was two years ago. It's doubtful after the time she had with him that she'd ever date him again, especially not because he's a good lay. *ugh*

    Outside of that, I liked this story so far. I love cocky, confident, but not obnoxious, Draco. Hermione's also cute.

    There are some things that don't make since, like calling Hermione petite when she's 5'7. She would need to be 5'3 or less to be considered petite. The average female is 5'4-5'6, so...
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  • From ANON - Elle on December 11, 2013
    I love this story!!! Please continue to write chapters, I guarantee you will always have an avid reader looking forward to more updates!
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  • From ANON - Silversal on December 08, 2013
    Omg! I'm so glad I've your story it's SO GOOD! Thank so much for writing such a awesome story. I can't wait till you update, you have yourself a new fan girl lol.

    Silversal
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  • From ANON - Margot le Faye on December 07, 2013
    It is beyond fantastic to see you back and picking up this delightful story again. Very much enjoyed this chapter and I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - MilissaRukia on December 05, 2013
    This story is so sweet and enticing. I tried to give a review before chapter ten but could not. Now I do not remember what I was going to say about the earlier chapters. But I do know that it is very well written and the plot line is captivating. I love that Ron and Draco were honestly fighting over Hermione. And that she was rooting for him to get a good blow in was perfect. I love how they have a chemistry that neither one wants to admit but after the end of this chapter I think that they can not deny it much longer. And for them to kiss just because they wanted to and not for any other reason is something that can get carried away if only people would stop intruding. Thank you for a brilliant story to read I am waiting breathlessly for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Carly on December 04, 2013
    Incredible!
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  • From ANON - YourNextVictim on December 02, 2013
    I freaking love this story. Please keep updating! It's got great chemistry and is so well written!
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  • From ANON - Alkeni on November 29, 2013
    I like this story. I hope for me. :)
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  • From SAS on November 27, 2013
    I'm loving jealousy, and am falling in love with a very Slytherin Draco along with Hermione.
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  • From Trelweny on November 24, 2013
    Um... I'm confused: You have Ron dating Padma Patill but then saying that she's talking about him in the dorms where Hermione can hear and that she's not bright... but Padma is a Ravenclaw. Since she was talking to Parvati in the dorms should we conclude you meant Lavender Brown?

    Otherwise I really like how this has started out. While I like Draco-turning-a-new-leaf stories, Draco seeing Purebloods as being above bowing to a Half-Blood makes so much sense.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 21, 2013
    This is a fabulous story! The characters seem very much themselves, instead of the normal "oh draco suddently notices hermione and falls in love all in one chapter". Fantastic!
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  • From ANON - LadyFireCrab on November 20, 2013
    Oh! I really hope you update soon, I'm absolutely dying to see what happens next with those two. I love that you didn't tone down Hermione's fire or Draco's deviousness, unlike most who pair the two of them. All I can say is More! More! More!
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