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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From chiquitaf16 on November 06, 2009
    Again I feel guilty for not leaving more reviews but I hardly realize just how fast I'm burning through this story, it's addictive and I love it. I kept waiting for Draco to have a reaction to Blaises bracelet for Hermione but I guess you're not going to have him react to it. I also love the idea of having Hermione use lucius to get to Voldemort.
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  • From chiquitaf16 on November 05, 2009
    First I'm loving this story and have just been too much into to it to stop reading and review. Also there is no way you can realistically keep this relationship going between the two of them without the slash. Men are just too possesive especially men like Draco and Blaise, however, if they are also lovers then they aren't really sharing Hermione in a relationship but really just being in a three way relationship. I love my husband but hell, I would love to be in a relationship with two hot bisexual guys, I guess just reading stories like yours will have to do.
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  • From Catium on November 04, 2009
    I didn't have a clue how to answer your review to my story so I just decided to answer it by reviewing your story. No english is not my first language. I'm Icelandic. I know there are some language based mistakes in the story and the ones you tell me about these are the words I've a lot of trouble getting right although I try to read the story over extra well and fix all the mistakes that I see but some mistakes always get past my attention, since I don't have a beta but OMG I would love to have a beta. Will you by my beta? And yes finally...thank you very much for the compliments I'm very pleased with this story and I think it's pretty damn good especially since it's the first story I ever wrote.
    Thanks so much for taking time to write a review that is also a constructive critisim it's always nice getting to know what mistakes I'm doing so I can try to fix them.
    Cheers Catium.
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  • From kazfeist on September 28, 2009
    So glad to see you've updated, after so long! I can't wait for the end of the story....with all the practice Hermione has been getting, it's a wonder she's not already carrying twins...a blond one and a brunette. :D
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on September 06, 2009
    This story is bloody amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - JenJen on July 30, 2009
    Were the chapters, well, most of the chapters named after songs?
    "Keep your hands off my girl"
    "The balck parade" - MRC (Welcome to the black parade)

    And there were more, I just can't remember, after reading this story 3 or 4 times, its brilliant, please do write me of it :)
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  • From ANON - Adeila on July 09, 2009
    Well that was an epic read! I've just read the whole story, i'm impressed that your plot is plausible and your imagery is excellent !

    Keep writing, you're awesome! :)
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  • From kazfeist on June 02, 2009
    Wow! I'm so glad you've decided to updated....I had wondered what else was going to happen. :D
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  • From morwen4re on May 30, 2009
    Yay! I love this story... Please update soon... This is my favorite, and the story that got me into draco/hermonie/blaise fiction... I can't wait to read more!
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  • From mlui on May 30, 2009
    62: Squeal!! You updated!! I'm so excited and I enjoyed reading the chapter. I liked the Harry/Ginny interaction; it was cute. It sounds like Ron and Pansy are okay...then again, it really isn't Ron's fault that he has pranksters for brothers. As always, the Draco/Hermione/Blaise parts are fantastic. I hope you'll update again soon! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2009
    There ought to be a law against anything that hot and I don't give a damn if there is. LMAO Phew. So totally jealous of Hermione right now!!!!!

    As for Harry and Ginny's moment - just enough to make it the perfect touching end to a deliciously glorious chapter. :)
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  • From dragongirl on May 29, 2009
    My dear Narcissa Black, welcome back, we have miss you so much and this fic is one of my favorites. I had gone to it so many times that I cannot count anymore, LOL, Please we need more more more.... Thank you for posting here.
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  • From illnevertell on May 05, 2009
    After I read Ch.29 I saw a note to someone who didn't like your sex scenes and I felt the need to tell you that I think you are fantastic at them. I am not a writer but I am an avid reader of HP fanfiction and I have been for over 5 years. In my opinion this story is a classic and I have read it alot and I always enjoy it and it never ever gets old. I adore the way you have portrayed the characters and the story line is wonderful. The sex is so good that I have to sit back and admit that I would LOVE to trade places with some of the characters and more than once I have had to stop reading and go attack my husband. I know he is very appreciateive of your talent. I really hope that the poor opinion of a few would not in any way discourage you from writing or make you think you need to change what you are so good at doing. I wish that Icould be blessed with even a fraction of your talent. I also want to thank you for writing and sharing this story. It has brought me much happiness and I turn to in times of stress and I always find comfort in reading it. As a navy wife with a husband who has been serving in the war for the better part of a decade finding comfort is a rare and wonderful thing. Thanks so much again and please keep writing. Sincerely, Jaimie
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  • From ANON - mayu on February 02, 2009
    i completly love this fic and I would never forget about it , not matter if it has been years since I read it

    the new chapters are great hopefully you will update soon


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  • From sherrithewriter on July 24, 2008
    Brilliant! I am sooo glad you decided to update this fabulous story. I have it read it twice and wondered if you would ever update it. Gives me hope for one of my other favorite stories, "Scales and a Tail," by Halfling. Anyway, I think you do a wonderful job writing the characters. I love all of the relationships you put together and can't wait to see what the amulet says about their relationship. Cheers!
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